Great Story!

A lot of times, I look at the word count on a story and say "Ah, too many words, will not read"

I didn't do that this time. Thank goodness I didn't.

Honestly? I have nothing to say. It was perfect, amazing, wonderful, heartbreaking, bittersweet and about a trillion other things. For once, someone had written a story where despite the canon couples getting together, married and having kids-life won't give them a break. Heiji and Kazuha's Shinako and Hana's death were expressed so beautifully. And Heiji seeing his daughter's ghost? I think that was the most painful and heart-wretching thing that I have ever read in my entire life.

Kiyoshi was wonderfully written too. It's amazing, really how much emotion you put into him, how you clearly showed his feelings of abandonment, how he doesn't understand his father's absence, how he hates that fact that he's being lied to by everyone who knows him all the time...

It's just...wow.

Seriously, this was amazing. I commend you for writing something so utterly true and heartbreaking, showing how just because you end up with the person you love, get married and have children-doesn't mean that life still isn't fair. Because marriage and children isn't the ending, it's the beginning of something a whole lot more scary, a whole lot more difficult-and how Kaito and Aoko were so hesitant towards one another, how the scene were Kiyoshi comes to sleep with Aoko in the bedroom, and how completely strange she feels sleeping next to him-it's so REAL and just...

I love this. I this story too much and everything was just amazing. I loved this. I loved this. I love it. And it was always be that one honestly surprising story that has deeply touched me, and has really shocked me in my entire life. So yeah...

You BETTER be proud of yourself for making this. :)

Hello!

Alright, I'll forgive your French. But that's only because this Snapshots fic is truly, definitely amazing. I think the format is perfect, it really fits the story. And I liked your OCs too :)
Thank you so much for writing this!

Hallolo

PS: Please, next time you need French, don't go Google Translator, it sucks. Feel free to ask me (I'm French)

WOW.

*sits there and stares hard at the screen*

You had me caught from the first sentence. :) This fanfic was touching, it was funny, it was dark and it was absolutely, amazingly, fantastically awesome!

You're a great writer and you shouldn't ever give up writing. XD

I hope to see more of your works in the future!

i really think the story is creative and i like the way you wrote itthis whole snapshot thing is so brilliant

OMG BEST STORY EVER!

i think this is the best fan fic ive read so far!

Wow! I love it! It took me about an hour to read, not counting breaks, and I enjoyed every second of it! You made me laugh, you made me cry! It's perfect.

And, I should have caught the InuYasha cameo, but I didn't... I'm only on chapter ninety-three of it.

This was the best thing ever. But I missed Kaito so bad! And it was long, but then, I love the long ones!

I really liked reading this. You did such a good job writing it. I find as I read all the amazing stories that you and various other people write I wish I could write one just as detailed and good.

Awesome! Tsugoii! Splendid! Love it! Tsubarashii!

I'd better stop before I run out of words to describe this very very long, but worth reading, oneshot. XD

I love Kiyoshi. And I love how you made Heiji a little psychic in this. Poor Hana-chan and Shinako-chan!

All in all, I love this story and I hope to read more from you!

lovies

Ok...my dictionary doesn't have enough words to describe this story...so i'll only say...THAT WAS F*ING AMAZING! TOTALLY MIND BLOWING! IT WAS LIKE...GOSH IT MADE ME CRY, LAUGH AND SIT AT END OF MY CHAIR PONDERING WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN TO NEXT!

What happened to Hattori...god I felt a shiver running down my back when I read it. It's something a father should never endure. EVER. Him seeing her ghost...it was too strong and sad... T.T

Another thing that made me sad was Kaito situation when he came back. Feeling like a stranger to his own son and wife...

But, what made me laugh was Kiyoshi's questions about babies and how they are born...hahaha, the horror of every father...

When you described me how your story was going to be, I never imagined it was going to be this good! Full of impact, happy and sad moments, the ending that makes you reflect on things about your life (that's how it was to me ) You have a great talent there, congrats on that! 3

Can't wait to read more stories like this one! X3

Luv you!

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(melts)

That was so beautiful... and sad, and funny, and moving, and completely, completely awesome! Kaito's encounters with his son, and then coming back, and the interactions between the three families, and Kiyoshi's character downright perfect, and his walking off stage at the end, thus finishing his father's job - gah, I think I just fell in love. I LOVED THIS FIC! -bit enthusiastic? I don't care! It was so great!-

The only critic I can make is about your french - you need to work on that. There're a good lot of mistakes... but that's what makes it so cute

OMG... That was awesome... Great fic! I love how you ended it. Keep up the great work!