Reviews for Stories of the Citadel
march4fun chapter 3 . 7/8/2019
That ending made me wheeze!
debblu chapter 3 . 7/8/2019
I can see your Sam doing just this, even going so far as answering the door in full armour and taking the " suitor " to the Arena for a friendly chat while she casually blasts holo enemies to pieces. Thanks so much for writing these little snippets of life in your world.
rakuzo chapter 1 . 2/12/2017
The asari child is very cute!
seabo76 chapter 1 . 12/5/2016
Great story! End is a little off now given events of ME3 but still...great stuff
Simple Man chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
Well, your Shepard is too much paragon for my liking
ServeMeTheSky chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
Shepard's nana practises headology? *gasps* Shepard's nana is Granny Weatherwax! That would have been something to see.
weirdnerd chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
very nice OC
Kapleon chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Aww, this story was so cute and fluffy. I wish there were more side stories about Asari families.
Wisegal chapter 2 . 3/31/2011
These two minis were absolutely wonderful. You stayed true to the established characters and their voices, which is something sadly lacking in a lot of fanfiction. You have a real gift for storytelling, and I found myself completely drawn in to the situations you described. My favorite of the two was the first tale of the lost toddler, but I laughed myself hoarse over Ashley's 'show and tell'. You do the voice of a small child very believably. :) I'll be heading off to look at the rest of your stories.
Hewhoislost chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
very impressive, the AU you have created is worth the time it takes to read it.I have read very few thing that have been worth the time, this is one of them
Guardian54 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Apparently Turians live for over 106 years if Benezia had only just given birth to Liara when Septimus came around and saved Sha'ira...

So how old IS Septimus? I thought Turians only live like 150-some years like humans did. There is no way Septimus could have commanded a squadron at 30 or something, as if he was older then he'd be too old to start that shit about Sha'ira.

But still, I SO expected that Liara/Sha'ira link :D
Fayneir chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
So sweet...I liked the ending.
Nura de Mithlond chapter 2 . 10/22/2009
Great . I really like this kind of fanfictions, stories about daily life.
Ecro Xineoph chapter 2 . 10/10/2009
Man, I don't even know where to start! This chapter was just as awesome as the last! I have to say, Ash's story was HILARIOUS!

My favorite of the three, however, was definitely Sam's. I really liked how it kinda drew a parallel between the two chapters with how Sam was with little Maysa and how Benezia was with little Sam. I also loved how you portrayed Benezia. I'm sad that she is so often only thought of as she was when indoctrinated so I'm glad to see her how she was before. Also, I think this chapter contains one of my favorite lines from anything I've ever written. "You are called Sam and yet your name is Samantha, perhaps it is the same of those we worship." I think I've read this line about 50 times! It's a beautiful sentiment.

And once again you manage to pull off a mushy ending! At least I didn't almost cry at this one like I did the last chapter.

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
MasterYuri666 chapter 2 . 10/8/2009
Great story. The childhood stories on these characters was immensely enjoyable read and even brought our a few 'aws' with the touchy-feely moments. Oh and Sparks as a nickname for Tali was deadon. Keep the good times coming.
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