Hello Pojo-san!

Please update. It would be great to see this story continued!

Sincerely,
Proxy1980
Critics United Trainee

Hello Pojo-san!

My god, this is a beautifully written piece of fanfic. Keep writing!

Sincerely,
Proxy1980

Hello, I liked your fic, hopefully follow soon with the fic, especially since RoyEd couple is my favorite, I love it, but Roy is a pig, now you'd better, poor Ed, and still Roy says that if this, if that, and Ed, and you'd better also, is a stubborn fool, hopefully do more fics of them together, well, still thanks and kisses.

Ummmmm
This was updated 4 years ago...
So...
You still writing or...

More I want more progress with thier relationship! More chapters to! Sorry I'm so demanding your writing is intoxicating!

Omg. This is an amazing story, you have to continue it! I love it so much! The characters are fantastic and its very realistic. I love this.

...And the wait begins. I will diligently refresh the page waiting for the day when the 12th chapter shows it's title. I'm offering you some serious praise right now, this Fanfiction is such an amazing piece of work that I would probably die of heartbreak if you ended up leaving it and never touching it again. I love how you have been able to progressively show how a characters "Character" changes as events in life hit them in the face with a baseball bat. Don't take flames seriously, I did and I ended up leaving Fanfiction for almost two or three years. (As a result I have two posted stories and 14 ongoing fanfiction's and 3 stories of my own creation, in my "Current works" folder on my computer.) You have an amazing way of showing character without using the words from the character.

I just noticed this in the reviews that I was looking at and wasn't sure if you were actually thinking about changing it from a RoyXEd to a parental RoyXEd. I just wanted to say that you should follow whatever your inner writer ends up putting on the page and don't suppress it to try and follow what you originally wanted to do. It would just make you want to never write again because you won't be inspired. Let the story take you where you want to go. My only concern about changing it into a parental is that they had sex. I honestly don't know how you would write it to make it seem parental because having sex with someone who was supposed to be considered your father is...strange... But like I said, don't try and force your writing to come out like you originally planned it to, it'll be far easier, (and keep you inspired) if you just write the words that pop into your head because it's okay to make a new plot and change things around. That's the beauty of writing your own things, they aren't under the structure of someone else's brain and you are free to change it even after it's completed.

I also read in the comments something about you wanting to delete the story and I just have to say. If you do this, it will be the greatest regret of your life. Like I previously mentioned I left for two or three years because of flames and whatnot. I ended up being unable to look at most of my fanfictions. I deleted two series, one of them a FullMetal Alchemist, and I now regret it because apparently a lot of people loved it. I have gotten several PM's about where the story went and if I was going to repost it. I had to inform my readers that I deleted it and had no copies. This is probably one of the worst feelings in the world. I am now rewriting the series and actually enjoying it because I didn't follow what I had previously done. I'm doing something completely new and I feel like if that's something you want to do, then don't waste time thinking about it. Just do it.

Well I've rambled on long enough, I just don't want others to make the same mistake I did. I have fallen in love with this work of art and I can't wait for you to update. (Looking at your year long periods I'm hoping for a June update (Happy birthday to meee) but am expecting an August update (Yay relief from the new school year update)).

Wishes of the destruction of writers block and the continual love of writing,
Koibito

PLEASE COME BACK *SOB* *SOB*

This story is really good and i would love to see it continued. However, Roy's assumption about mental hospitals is very inaccurate. I've been in mental hospitals and until you reach the age of 18 you can be placed in solitary confinement or a straight jacket without parent or guardian consent. You live three to a room with a team of nurses to keep an eye on you. You get a therapist, psychologist and group therapy. I don't blame you though, its a common misunderstanding I used to think that too. :) You're a great author and I want to see this updated!

well it s almost a year right?

Please, please, please continue this story! It's fun to read and wonder what will happen next.

Btw, there is a difference between a psychiatrist and a psychologist. A psychologist is the person you talk to about stuff; stuff that upsets you, things that make you feel like you need to indulge in self harm, etc. It's like therapy. A psychiatrist is the person you get medicine from that helps control mental issues (i.e. Deppresion, ADHD, bipolar disorder, etc.) And I should know because I see both. Just wanted to make that clear because there is a huge difference.

It's been six months...can you update soon, please?

Awesome. ;)

Please continue your story! It's really interesting and discriptive; I like how you characterized Edward when he couldn't speak. That takes skill. Please continue to write!

Am I catching a drift from Shutter Island or am I crazy?