Oh God, I loved it. And I like that it feels like the continuation of your wedding one shot (which fortunately I read first). I think this was a lot sadder than BD, but I guess that was kind of the point. Still, the hunting chapter was awesome, and I liked Bella's ability, although it feels a bit like "too good to be true".

What does Bella or anyone think self sacrifice is going to achieve? Especially if one is dead or enslaved it pretty much guarantees the same happens to the other. Like duhhhhh! What's the thinking? Is anyone thinking at all? Smh

I blame Calrise and Japser. They told a naive emotional newborn she was the key to everyone's survival ... to thier whole livelihood... to Edward's. like duh it's no wonder she ran off to "save the day!"

next Bella power is not some great thing... once she is dead the threat is gone. what's to stop aro from sending a bunch of vampires after the Cullens to kill her spe

Completely stupid for Edward to tell the pack of Bellas change when they had to do it in secret a d could gone without them noticing. plus its completely stupid to ask to stay long when. they will all eventually have to leave anyway... makes zero sense.

sorry by this story was very logical till your forced this nonsense in out of nowhere. smgdh

"What have we done to deserve this? ... ... we should be at her feet"

lol

Sorry but I felt could've skipped the first half of this chapter. and still be okay.

Holier than thou vampires. smh jeez relax. Accident averted. dont go putting a halo on her head about. good grief.

I like that you reminded us that the first human scent Bella should have smelled should've been her own. The struggle throughout the transformation. (pain, sweat, hallucinations, etc) all rang real.

Awesomely cute and with a different angle. Loved it.

I feel like that shouldn't have worked. Im thinking that the volturri could have EASILY over powered Bella, killed her and enslaved the cullens.

It just wasn't believable to me.

Bellas "power" is that she can….kinda smell...kinda see people far away LOL and vamps don't want human blood when shes around? Seriously?

Lamest gift EVER. You do realize that the earth is severely over populated right?

Doesn't seem like a big deal to me, so bellas change gets moved up.

AND?

Bell's power in the book was better

It is like she had SHEILDED them from their bloodlust. I wonder how many can she shield at a time. The Volturi won't like it; they will want her destroyed.

That's the most original, magnificent, brighest idea regarding vampire Bella and Cullens I've ever encouned, bravo! I used to find vamp Bella stories boring and usually skiped them or the parts of some other stories where Bella eventually is being turned and things just unprecedentedly predictable. But this story has been a true page turner for me, unprecedentedly. And I love how you picture persons, their thoughts and souls and behaviours, they are pursuadingly alive.