Gentle and loving.

Ha, what a timing! :)

Sweet, thank you

Oh, how I love this little story.

Tuvok ruined the moment!... He did save them though but still

Can we have 'later'?

Hello, I enjoyed your story (not happy that they had to indure such pain)...You made it work...Thank You for sharing your wonderful talent...Juanita from Texas*

Short and sweet. Nice work. I have to agree with many of the other reviewers...it is more effective without the addition of sex. The way you have written it seems so much more heartfelt and sincere. Thanks for sharing it.

Beautiful!

Beautifully written. This story may be short but it conveys so much emotion. I believe that including "sex" would have distracted from the story and lessened the impact.

It's very creative. I really like what you did with the story. It was very sweet and touching.

First reaction: aw.. that is so sweet.

Constructive reaction: this story is a study in how to use small gestures to convey beautifully complex emotions to the reader.

You said you wished you could have used sex in this story, but in my opinion, it would have been completely superfluous, and would actually have taken away from the simplicity of the story. Again, in my own humble opion, emotions, expressed in the simplest ways, can be more powerful than any sex scene.

Nice work!

So much emotion put into such a short story. BRAVO!