You know, previously I could never understand, why seekers get Sky madness when they cannot fly for a prolonged period. Now I understand! Today I want flying in a little Pläne at a flight Club and it was absolutely heaven! When I told the pilot about the seekers and Sky madness, he laughed and said it sounds very familiar and that he feels mad, too if he doesn't fly for a long time period. I think I'm going flying again soon, too...

the last chap? this is so saaad I loved it!

:)

wow. this fic is. something else, eh?

really nice.

i can't believe you mae optimus.. decepticon-ish! and having orgy! lol!

didn't megatron try to find out who hurt Starscream in the previous chapters? didn't starscream want revenge?

kinky

By the way - the only problem I have with your fiction is your spelling of loosing, and that only got my attention because you spelt it the same way every - single - time :)

'Loose' - opposite of 'tight', so the the verb would be 'loosening' or something like that. 'lose'- opposite of 'win' or 'gain', and it's verb would be 'losing'.

I don't know how you made these characters both out-of-character and in-character at the same time. But you made it work.

I think it's a kind of genius.

Even the stuff that usually makes me squeamish, is just interesting to read, the way you have written it.

Great job!

i must tell you my friend i started reading this at like 11 pm sunday nite and i stayed up till like 10 am monday morning and only made it to chapter 10. then i had to go places without a lick of sleep with 7 chapters to go and when i got home i fought the sleep jus to finish reading. it is now thursday and i am STILL bone tired. i blame you and your brother for my horrible predicament. if this fic wasn't so good then i wouldn't have stayed up 10 hours straight and my sleep pattern wouldn't be so out of whack.

i'm not mad though! in fact i LOVE you for this fic! like A LOT! so much megs/screamer in it taht mah brain be asploded in a bajillion pieces of gooey messyness...yeah it's not a pretty picture...

what else can i say? um...i didn't expect megs and screamer to be so...open...in their relationship...hahaha...o/_/O...

oh...and...the ellipses...while i do admit they got on my nerves...because everytime i saw them i would make pauses...like...this...i enjoy using them in my writings too hahaha...

and your sky scream idea was really awesum too. poor screamer. it's okay megsy is there for you

well i think i am done here. i should try to get my sleeping back on track now since i start classes again next week *sigh* keep up the fantastic work!

Please tell me you did a follow up fic about what happened to Opty when he got back and shared his new found interests... lol:)

SO AWESOME! *is sad that she's finished*

This is amazing...a wonderful wonderful MegaScream with some Seeker thrown in there...just the right mix :D

Through me for a loop with the whole Optimus thing but I like it :D What a great way to win the war...now I wonder who Optimus corrupts...:D

I just love this so much...It's so hard to find an awesome fic like this...I really like the idea behind the whole 'sky scream' thing...that it's different from his usual pained wailing and I definitely like that it affects Megs the way it does.

M...yumy...lots of smut :D Which I love...but I also love drama and the what-not...maybe you could do a MegaScream with more plot and less 'facing? (or maybe just more plot and the same amount of 'facing?) (Don't get me wrong I *love* this but I'm a sucker for plot and drama and the two of you just write so well that I can't help but ask...)

This was just fantastic! *eyes sequel*

Right...so I've pretty much read these first 7 chapters in a row...and it's so late now that I need slep but first I wanted to tell you how very awesome I'm finding this!

This is exactly what I love/look for in a relationship between the two of them...It's just...so PERFECT! I just adore the way both of you write them...they can't be completely evil all the time...they just can't...no one can...and I'm sorry to see you've gotten flames over it...I'll help you make s'mores over them!

I have quote I usually send to flamers (along with the don't like it? don't read it rant) if they think my Megatron's too weak or my Autobots are too evil or the what not..."There is good in every villain, and evil in every hero. You just need to look hard to see it." I think it's apt *shrugs*...

But this is amazing amazing amazing...I wish I could make myself stay up and read more...but I needs slep...

I'm definitely excited to see you've already started a sequel SQUE! More yummy goodness...provided screamer and megs make up of course...which I'm sure they will...but I don't know because I have to leave myself a cliffy...*whimper* Anyway I just thought I'd let you know that this is fantastic! I know so many RPers who never share what they write with anyone else...which is sad...so thanks so much for sharing this with us!

(Also I love ellipses!...little...dots...are...the...BEST! I'm sure I drive people bonkers with them too...my betas are always like "you used the little dots again" *shrugs* Just can't help myself lolz) Anyway this turned into rambling really fast...I blame my sleep addled brain and my habit of rambling at authors whose stuff I really like...it's a bad habit...or a good habit...depends on how annoying you find it I suppose...Anyway! GREAT STORY! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE! *bounces excitedly* ...is shutting up now...

Also I loves your Megatron and Screamer they are awesome...

Sweet Primus! So much beautiful spark-merging hotness...I salute you.

Could you write the Autobots' reactions when Optimus returns to them, and how Optimus' time with the Decpticons changed him?

Little Seeker? Thats a fucking retarded nickname...