I'm not quite sure I understand the ending.
But this is a fantastic take on a fantastic scene. Well done!

Great read :)

Thank you for reminding me that scene. Is one of my favorites in whole trilogy. Also nice take on Marty's thoughts back then.

Aw! That's really awesome! I've always loved that part, too, and you captured it amazingly here! *U* Rock on!

Great fic. I loved this part in the movie too:) Doc is amazing in it.

I can't find your fic Bolts of Opportunity on this site, could you send me a link to it if possible? Thanks:)

I'm not sure I completely understand all you intended by it (especially the ending), but I really enjoyed it. Good job. :)

Dunno...I would think Marty would flash through his entire life in general a bit more (probably pausing to think about Jennifer more than once) if he was dying. That's just what I think.

Good story, but this should be rated K not T.