Ur not updating are ya?

Retarded!

Love the story but for the record kamikaze means divine wind.

Great job please continue

Why would you disrespect Naruto's mother like that? He definitely is Naruto Uzumaki, because his mother is Kushina Uzumaki. You're writing this as if Minato just birthed Naruto himself, like Naruto didn't have a mother. You are mad disrespectful.

hehe inner walls

Son nom reste uzimaki car c'est le nom de sa mère kushina a moins que cela ne soit .mere.

male or female harem?

Xion. You mean from kingdom hearts roxas girlfriend

But Naruto is an uzumaki as well as namikaze his mother is kushina uzumaki of the land hidden in the whirlpools

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you said "enjoy, or I will find you" Where's the last part of taken. "and I will kill you" hehehe.

I feel like you made Naruto a bit more like a douchey sasuke, and whatsup with that gay comment? Feels like Naruto gone a bit scummy, I'll check a few more chapters to see if his character stays like this.

Ehhh?

Your fiction makes totally no sense.

Kyuubi was safety sealed, but he could steal Narutos 'true self', crippling him permanently? Seems farfetched and unlikely.

What is it with Narutos sudden addiction of power? The word 'power' alone may cause him an orgasm... he is way too much like Sasuke or Orohimaru in that regard. Disgusting.

And what is it with him finally being able to use the basic Bunshin after his Chakra reserves increased!? His clones always looked so sick because he has waaay above Kage lvl Chakra reserves and no control of it! He is able to produce 1000 Shadow Clones! There is no way for him to pass this 'test'!

Shitty chapter/fiction.