I liked the fluffiness of this. Glad I came across it.

So I've read this. yeah. One question I'll always have is how anyone can read this fic and click off unperturbed. Not in a bad way, mind, but I don't see how anyone could remain completely un-flustered by the tension you managed to pack so concisely into every single scene. Characterisation and use of situation aside, and you'd still have a bloody fantastic fic with the amount of emotion you manage to convey without specifically narrating whats going on. That you excel at all three, is only a testament to your talent in writing. Honesly? Bravo. You've done for yourself a bloody fantastic job, and I can't be any happier!

This is a really good fic! A lot of the Zukka fics I've read so far often seem out of character, but this one developed really naturally and they had good chemistry that was still realistic. I like it a lot!

Great fic

Wow, Sokka is so confident, I love it! You write their relationship so well!

so good thank you

That was a really good story.

good story

This pairing had never really appealed to me before but I'm so glad I read this. You got Asoka exactly right. How he's all about finding joy in the moment and the people he meets and how he's utterly comfortable with himself once he's made a decision. He's an amazing contrast to Zuko who's like a raw nerve. I loved it.

You know I've never once had any interest in these two as a couple, I love them both separately but together I always thought It was just kind of you know weird but then I stumbled upon this story and it was actually surprisingly good and i kind of ship it a little bit now :)

-Zoxy

Oh my. Oh my GOODNESS. That was hot, hot, hot! Loved all the interactions between the characters. Beautifully written to emphasize the tension. That was the sexiest part- the tension between the two. Angsty, adorable Zuko is literally the best. Well done. I wish there was more!

this is so perfect this is all kinds of perfect oh my goodness.

I love the way you capture them. This entire story is so gentle with emotions, your writing is amazing. I'm jealous. :) Somehow I keep coming back to this story, either by accident or through links other people give me, or whatever the case may be. This time I saw a Sukka post on Tumblr that the person's favorite Sukka stories and I forgot I already read this until I started reading and ughh this story is perfect and I love you. Seriously. Don't stop writing. You're amazing at it.

nice

Awesomeness!

It's true though, you could have just taken this in a explicitly explicit direction, and messed up their characters- but I like how it's obviously happening at the end, but you focus on the characters themselves. :D Aww, sorry but... I rather love zuko. And you wrote him pretty sweetly here xD hahaha