AWWWWWW

So I'm just... gonna. Go. Cry.

The point that made me weepy was the hand part. I don't know why. It was so sensitive, so sweet but still so Vegeta.

Dead.

I am a huge fan of squishy Vegeta while maintaining a somewhat tough exterior. He's like.. a jelly bean!

es la mejor historia de Bulma y Vegeta que he encontrado, es maravillosa!

I know you haven't updated in forever, but OMG, don't hate this chapter. It's fucking awesome! PS don't be afraid of lemon, I just know you'd be awesome at it- you're a great writer!

thats so freaking adorable

Ok... i can't with my shame right now... but after all these years i'm going to upload the first chapter in spanish. I'm sorry, really, that i didn't do it since 2008. I retired the fanfiction world but i hope to come back and make others know this great story :) I'm just glad, didn't remember it was so beautiful. Thanks for this.
Regards :)

Awesome fic! I think you're doing a great job and I hope to read more soon!

awww I'm so sorry to hear about your loss.. I know this may be late but I pray that God gives you strength.

hi girl, im sorry for your lost, i just can say that its an awful feelings and its easy speak about it and say that i know what you are feeling , but its a lie, nobody knows what it feel to be in that situation, only the person itself know all the sadness, impotence and powerlessness around you, my granma died years ago by cancer too, and despite its not the same, i just can say that sometimes die is better than the suffering they feel, now he is resting in peace and he doesnt feel pain anymore, he is caring of you in heaven.

encourage, life goes on, its easy say it but dificult to do it.

I love that story, you kept Vegeta and Bulma very much in character. I think that's very difficult, so congrats! xD

This was a really awesome story- I laughed, giggled, gasped, cried and al that jazz at all the right moments. Is it done? Could you write more? Sorry about your dad, I cried when I read that.

xxx

The-Over-Emotional-Queen

Ugh, The rape thing ruined this for me. Can't read it anymore. You did such a great job or making Bulma and Vegeta realistic. But honestly how can any woman fall for a rapist? And you made him one which makes me unable to continue.

I always loved Vegeta but forgot about him and all the others for years. Your story reminds me of the reason..

...except the last two chaps... too heart breaking for me...

Keep up the good work and please show us fans of the story that Vegeta cares for her. I thought it was adorable when Trunkss tail reached for Vegetas hand

Maybe if someone tried to get her heart, someone perfect that would love a son and could offer her everything she wanted..Vegeta would realise that she might actually leave him and let another man be called dad by his son...Bulma loves just Vegeta though as we all know... Just let him show...something? You dont have to use that plotline, just a suggestion..?

Keep up the good work and bring some other characters to the story too?

Anna

A truly compelling piece. There wasn't any OOC-ness, which I appreciated, and the development was even-paced. A true pleasure to read; you are talented!