Reviews for Greater Than a Pharaoh, Lesser Than a Slave
queenlaur chapter 1 . 9/25/2017
I LOVE THIS! You captured the dilemma of social rank perfectly. A beautiful way to tell a touching story and at the same time make a wonderful point! I have to say it again! I LOVE THIS!
liberatedsociety chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
I like this one. It made me remember of one question I have in my mind but I'm saving it for later. Anyways, in Ancient Egypt slaves are the property of the owner same as just furniture. And pharaohs don't say their given names for it was said that names held power and for someone-a slave to be given the name of the pharaoh means he/she is privileged to stand unbidden in the monarch's presence. Very few people-rarely gets the opportunity to know the pharaoh's name. Just a little tidbit of facts. But I really love the concept of this one.
BriarFire chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
But, in ancient Egypt, Pharaohs are considered gods. They are basically thought of as a god in human flesh. So, yeah, what the man with the whip did would be comsidered treason, blasphemy (maybe), and a multitude of other offences that would surely lead to a public and painful execution or something like that.
SnowyOwl765 chapter 1 . 12/21/2015
OMG! I, too, have often wondered about things similar to te main idea of this story. Like why a king is considered more powerful, even if he was nothing but a man before he was recognized and worshipped? I like this story. Please write more! (I like these story with actual lessons or a real-world idea/thought behind it)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
How sweet I loved it
kate chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
Please put up chapter 2 soon and hurry
ForestGuardian311 chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
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I was definitely not expecting the slave to be Yugi...But, you made Atem wise beyond his years. I think that's one lesson everyone needs to learn. We are all human, why does rank matter? You know, it might have been more interesting if you had put a young (though older than Atem) Thief King in Yugi's place instead, but this works just as well.

Wonderful Job!
lilystar6 chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
great idea
Jasmine Gantt chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
AWSOME!Where can I find the next one?
Blackowlangel chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Aw, best story I've read in awhile. I love it. 3
Bleachfan365 chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
That was a really heart-touching story. i loved the ending too.
Umbrae Calamitas chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Oh. My. God.

Wolfie, that was positively BRILLIANT!

I loved that so much! But of philosophical question in there, too, and I could totally see Atem doing something like that! Wow! This is so one of my favorite stories EVER!

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.
surfergirl19 chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Great story! I hope you write a another chapter!:)
meme12 chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
What a meaningful story. Keep writing please
Ahmose chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Wow! This is awsome! I love it! I hope you feel like writing more stories soon cause these are awesome! -
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