Isn't Naga'Sadow from Star Wars?

great story

It was really interesting to read this story. I enjoyed your take on the events between ME and ME2, with Shepard not dying. The various developing relationships between the characters were also portrayed in a realistic manner.

Loved it. especially the little BSG or Doctor Who or other references in it. The good men and Thier rules speech really fits Shep, especially this Shep.

Sucks about Pressley as he did come around in the end.

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Lol they have a point, but at the same time I wouldn't want to mention that to Shepard, that William needs to get laid. Not only that, but they're also right about Liara, you don't piss off a pregnant woman lightly, especially one with biotics. As for this tomb and the Device, that was clever. Well done!

Well, this took a weird turn if I've ever seen one, even for a Mass Effect story. It's good, I'm not complaining by any means, it's just weird lol.

Dawww! Little Sparrow is so cute! I've seen asari baby fan art pictures before, and it's impossible not to fall in love with the little kids, although babies of any race or species can say the same thing lol. Still, this was beautiful in its own right, and I'm definitely a fan of Liarea having a little one to keep her level headed if the worst comes to pass. By the way, you aren't the only one to have thought how terrifying Shepard could become if she ever went rogue.

Javik might be a bastard, but he, as Ksad is proving, was at least honest about what his people did. I'll give them that much at least. As for Aleena, yeesh lol. That was good, no two ways about it.

Sorry Jack, you lose this round lol. Still, now I'm curious to know if this Asset was who I think it is, and if she's going to be meeting the Commander before too long? In either event, this whole thing is amazing, and I'm really excited to see what else you have in store.

I don't know if I want to thank TIM for setting Udina to self destruct, because that's pretty much what he did thus ensuring the rest of her and his enemies follow suit, or shoot TIM now for allowing this to come up at all. Udina wouldn't have gotten this far without Jack Harper's help. Still, LOVED how you had Wrex give his word during Ashley's story, as well as Aleena's analogy about Shepard's ability to lead and the animals of her homeworld.

Well, it seems I was wrong yet correct at the same time, Aleena wasn't there to protect anyone...until now lol. Damn that was tense, I thought the hack attempt against the geth prime was tense, but Shepard's confrontation with Aleena was many times worse for some reason. The conversation between Shepard and Liara was pretty tense too though, but I'm glad that ended well.

I almost feel sorry for Cerberus with Shepard and a small army at her side, except I remember all the twisted experiments you take apart, the cyberization of their own troops, and TIM's eventual murder of Anderson, even if you get him to commit suicide, having Cerberus on Ilios is not good. They'll be harder to remove than they think. Also, using a geth prime core...insane but awesome lol.

I couldn't help but hear the battle theme for Battlestar Galactica while I was reading that fighter section. To top it off, I was doing the same thing for the ground forces, except it was one of many Star Wars Clone Wars themes as they're engaged with the droid armies lol. You certainly got your point across in any event.