i like it! it has slightly more hope than the actual ending. i mean, it still implies they're all dead ... but it has that twisted sense of compatibility. a twisted sense of ... actual human nature. i like it! a lot!

nice work, love!

I luvz it. So sweet and sad. I actually had a similar idea, only in my story she lived...

Beautiful. It made me tear up and reminded me somewhat of my other fic, I'm not that girl.(R and R if you please!) A somewhat poetic way of expressing Sweeney Todd. Great work!