After completing FFVIII remastered, an as per usual when I finish this game I never want the story of Squall and Rinoa to end. Even though it is the most perfect ending, I always wanted to know what life brought for them next. I just finished Dancing in Time and Endless Waltz and they are so perfect. You got their personalities down perfectly! I guess I’m kinda sad too. The stories ended before they were truly complete. I keep wondering what the Shumi meaning on the tile in Trabia meant. I also wondered where Squalls personality would lead him next when it came to their relationship. Regardless I love reading these. I’ve never read anything like it. Thank you. ️I hope you are happy Ashbear, an that life has gotten better for you. Thank you for making these stories. Something tells me I will read them again someday!

Please tell me there's more? I am so engrossed and I mean they're half way through a conversation even!

DiT was my very first FFVIII fanfiction and I'm so happy about it, because it is such an amazing work. This following story is just as good written and captivating, so much in fact that I'm bond to ask "Pleaaase, come back and update it!". (laughs)
Anyway, I know you're probably busy with life in general, but I'll put your story on "Alert" in hopes of new chapters someday.
I enjoyed a lot your work, really.

Kisses,
Lecka-chan

This story is amazingly awesome.

I really love the story.
I did read dancing in time(twice)
I hope you're still active because i really would like too see what will happen next in the story

I am so in love with the story and the characters :') Please continue since I'm probably not the only one anxiously awaiting the next chapters with the development that comes with it. Great job so far and I actually have new inspiration from this to write again. Thanks a bunch!
P.s. I'm going to cosplay Rinoa sometime and this seriously made me want to finish my costume soon so I can find my own knight ;) (Just to take pictures with of course...)

I can't wait for the next chapter. Please continue to write, this is probably one of the best fanfics I have read thus far. Thank you so much for giving me something to serve as my entertainment in my free time.

Please tell me you update soon. I love your story. I don't mind your typos. Oh, and if you ever write a book I'll buy it. I think you are an excellent writer!

Absolutely love this story. I read Dancing in Time from start to finish and I recently finished reading this fanfiction. Really love how you do all this. I really want to see more of this story in the future!

Hi Ashbear ! I found a chapter of "dancing in Time" that I had printed once, a long time ago, to read in the train instead of waiting to be back home. And of course, holding it, I read it again... and each following chapters, self-congratulating myself for remembering the story that well, but I couldn't remember how she got out of the birth control conversation. And then Paf ! here I understand why... it's the next chapter ! and it's not out yet, madam :) Another round of clapping for me, I haven't forgotten anything, I just haven't read it yet.

Anyway, this story is still amazing at second, third or more reading, I still don't feel like reading in diagonal or skipping parts, I'm hooked anew every time !

I'm looking forward to you picking the story up in the coming months, it doesn't matter how long it takes, I'll be equally as excited about it as I am now.

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Looking forward to seeing the next chapters, your writing is amazing. Don't give up! :)

It seems like you may have abandoned this fic but after reading both Dancing In Time and this i really like how squall changes over time instead of all at once, its what sets your story apart from others. I hope you come back to this someday, I'll definitely be following.

Years and years ago when I was newer to fan fiction, I came across Crimson Lies and Castles in the Sky. Now an adult, I can still remember the vivid story telling and the genuine feel of the characters that you created. It's been a while since I've read FFVIII fanfic, but even now, I still find you to be the best Squall/Rinoa author out there. Dancing in Time and Endless Waltz have been very enjoyable reads, and the building tension between Squall and Rinoa is agonizingly exquisite. I truly hope you decide to continue this at some point but, speaking as a fellow author, I understand that thing called life happens. Until then, I'll just entertain myself with your other stories. Cheers!

very detailed story and very well build emotional characters

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I already post a review about this in After the fall section! But I'll write a short one here!
I really loved Dancing in Time/Endless waltz world. You really captured each character personality.
Pleassssse continue this story .. There are still questions that needs answers & I want to know what will happen to Squall & Rinoa!
Thank you.