Wooowwee i loved thé story, as much as i loved the descriptive writing i think some parts were dragged on too much and chapter 11(?) i think, i was confused what happened in the cave, the characters were a bit OOC at some parts and omg the lowkey plot twist at the end was surprising and uncalled for but super funny LOL loved it!

I'm really impressed by your writing especially for a fanfiction, it was a real pleasure to read it! As to read a good book but I don't get how the hell Sasuke has troubles with some kunais? I mean come on he is a Uchiha and has the sharingan, why he didn't put his enemies under gentjusu? They aren't shinobis, they probably don't even know that they have to avoid his gaze. He could knock them out without killing them, he could use fire jutsu or anything else but he reacted as a kid Shinobi, that was weird... And Sakura is really not the second strongest Shinobi, if Sasuke is the first then obviously Naruto is the second right? And there is something else I don't get why he tried to kill his brother again? I mean after he killed him in the Manga he found out who Itachi really was, a nice brother and a pure heart guy... I was troubled by some details like that but I really enjoyed their interactions and the strong sexual tension between them. Anyway I love your fic!

Such an original story! Love the bet, haha! And jealous Sasuke is the best type of Sasuke!

this is so bad lol

"Coming, baby?" — tbh I imagine Charasuke in this

Omg this story, I just read it all there I couldn’t stop it was soo good and now it’s 5:30am and I’m up at 6:30 for work lol, I love the character development and the thrill of excitement. Can’t wait to read more of your stories

I'm quite disappointed in this story. It is the last chapter, the story has ended, and there's nothing more to read. And I am thoroughly disappointed because you, author, have not answered the biggest and most important question of the story.

How, pray tell, the fuck did Sakura end up getting revenge on the Godaime for setting the two of them?

(And second most importantly, how the heck did the rest of the Konoha 12 and Team 7 react to Sasuke getting his head out of his ass and Sakura accepting his feelings?)

So very disappointed ~Scarlet

Thank you for writing an awesome story for a couple you don't even like (even DISlike). I have a lot of respect for how you pushed yourself out of your comfort zone for your fans and still did a pretty great job despite the circumstances. :)
You're a great writer. Keep up the good work!

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Sasuke had a bit of OOC-ness near the end but otherwise, good story!

HAAAAA SHE CATCH HE

I really do love this story, my one complaint is we don't get to find out how it all plays out with Lightening in the end, like does the Daimyo find out his son totally was groping Sakura and is more embarrassed than mad or does Sasuke have to do something to make up for it, do they demand his head on a platter? I need answers damn it!

although sakura was a bit ooc (there were never any doubts of her loving sasuke lol, she loves him and she is sure of her feelings for him) it was a good fanfic

I'm surprised of how detailed and descriptive your writing is amongst other things...it somewhat bores me because I'm not used to seeing such writing style in a fan-fiction but I'm not the type of reader to give up on a story I cannot handle. So, I'll continue reading until the end and give you my final feedback. #honestreader

did Sasuke not realize that he almost killed her when they were in the cave? and what exactly happened in the cave with the dogs and what was going on with the illusions?
anyway...pretty good story, I admit I actually found it humorous with the lime scenes...sooooo awkward! :D