Good grins, and some fun stuff. Thanks for a great (re)read!

Great story.

big brother is watching it all

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

awesome work, man!

YAS!YAS! 1000X YAS! That alternate end was great! XDDD

Oh god...so awful it was fantastic. I doubt even fiendfyre could kill it

Garret Winston, G.W., also known as Wizard Hitler. I'm about a third of the way through the chapter, and I think I've figured it out.

Why does Scrimgeour seem so much like Hitler?

XDD, it could be good, Severus the Seer try to change the future.

Yeah... you probably should have stopped at the other fic. The ending for that was bad but at least it was an ending. This whole fic was a bunch of rushed nonsense.

I'm really confused. Its like one person started the first one then handed it off to someone else without telling them where they intended to go with it. Then its like the second person finished the first fic and handed it off to someone else who didn't know where either of their predecessors were going with it. Then that first person takes the transmitter, the clones and the gang war to form a nonsensical plot that gets rushed through as if they either can't be bothered or they are too lazy to actually spend time writing.
I mean the 'Grand Conspiracy' sounds like a load of bull. If people were really going to either separate the two worlds, enslave the muggles or destroy the Muggles, they would have made a better plan.
(like cryogenically freezing every Dark Witch ore Wizard in History and unleashing them at once or making sure one of the World Wars wiped most Muggles out and enslaved the rest)

I loved A Twisted Timeline! And The Grand Conspiracy! Especially the alternative ending! Poor Severus! Haha. Sheep.

Thank you.

To be honest, this is the only chapter that actually seemed humorous to me. The rest of the story was drama. It's not a bad thing, but I'd prefer to read humour when the story genre is listed as humour :(