Deeply complex and interwoven. A myriad of colors swirling on canvas, as yet unresolved into their final shapes. If your muse stops by and draws forth another several chapters, I will enjoy reading them.

Please please update this story don’t leave it unfinished

What a place to leave off! Would love to see an update.

Glad to see an update. Been a while

I can't wait for what happens next in the story. It seems like an epic battle is being set up with all of the side characters coming into play. Thanks for the update!

Yay thanks for the update loved it :)

hey can you update this as soon as possible thaanks :(

Wonderful.
Update immediately, please!

Interesting chapter. I can honestly say I wasn't expecting a chapter with Joren's POV. He is exactly how I thought he would be - cold, stubborn, confused, and selfish. I want him to soften and redeem himself but at the same time I just don't think it would be enough. He is a wicked person. I think Tamora P. killed him off for a reason.

I'm not usually a fan of Kel/Joren stories, but this one is really good, and believeable for the characters in this situation. Keep up the good work!

PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY

I reckon Joren does love her and kai but is just in severe denial and has to continue a front for others. Cant wait for more keep going :)

oooh the suspense is building...

*high pitched squeal* so excited and so happy, keep going can't wait for more. I have been following this story for years always hoped this story would continue and eventually come to an end. Hope kel an find her son and joren will actually turn out to be alright.

Keep going! You're doing great. I absolutely love this story.