Reviews for UnNoticed
Guest chapter 2 . 3/7/2019
Not the worst person after all he saved the lives of 600,000 a year by mutding almost 300,000 in the span of 7. Sounds like a win in my book
EmeraldBlaire chapter 37 . 4/4/2017
This story is imcredible. Two thumbs up!
Light is completely in character and I loved how the OC wanted him in his dark side rather than the light one (no pun intended). It was very mature and the slow build romance was perfect.
Guest chapter 17 . 2/20/2017
Whatttttttt! How could you? I hate you! Your mean! Ok maybe not hate but a strong dislike. Since I have never met you either it will probably be temporary. Anyway good story. Hate this chapter tho for obvious reasons. I will keep reading. Thanks for writing.
Guest chapter 14 . 2/20/2017
あなたは死のノートを所有していない!
Sapphire6aps chapter 37 . 1/2/2017
I actually cried after reading this you know? Couldn't help it just so beautiful! especially when she says 'I've been waitingand light replies 'So have I'. Your writing style is also different and mature, nothing felt rushed, that's what made ot perfect . Can't stop praising you! Too good
Sapphire6aps chapter 37 . 1/2/2017
It was a great story. A light xOC couldn't be better than this one! I've read so many lightxOC but this touched me the most. Amazing. Hats off to you author. There are a lil bit of mistakes. But putting them aside, THIS WAS WONDERFUL! I was so touched by the relationship between Kino and Light! OMG. LOVE IT, JUST LOVED IT!
Guest chapter 37 . 2/25/2016
THIS IS NOT A HAPPY ENDING!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/29/2014
I wasn't gonna say anything but I guess in the end I just couldn't help it, hah. In the fourth line of this chapter, there is mention of some 'wanton' soup. If you are referring to the Chinese based broth, the more conventional spelling is 'wonton'. In fact, I have never come across a case where the spelling 'wanton' is used. More importantly, 'wanton' has a number of other meanings, including 'deliberate and unprovoked' and 'sexually immodest or promiscuous' (Wikipedia). This, as you can imagine, can render the interpretation of the sentence at best, ambiguous and at worst, comical. I wasn't sure whether or not you were aware of this fact so I thought I would mention it in this review. Please don't take this the wrong way, I am not criticizing your writing. It may be pedantic of me, but I felt it needed to be said.
Lena chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Amazing
Animefreak1145 chapter 37 . 9/5/2014
I FREAKIN LOVED THIS STORY! XD

IT WAS SO FREAKING AMAZING!

THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS
STORY AND COMPLETING IT! XD

CANT WAIT TO READ YOUR OTHER
STORIES! XD
KarasuTengu.Kirin chapter 37 . 2/4/2014
Though some people have considered your character to be a Mary-sue, I don't agree with them at all. Those idiots don't know the real meaning of Mary-sue. Kino has gone through hardships and hurt inside, despite not showing it on her expression. Something that sounds like what I would do personally. I hope that Light and Kino have both been reincarnated into shinigami and find each other.
Great job on the story, its better than you might think.
AnimeObsessedKitty chapter 20 . 1/10/2014
Wait a sec... If his palm was on her heart... Which is in the left side of her... Upper chest, so to speak... WAS LIGHT COPPING A FEEL? PERVERT!
sassmastertong chapter 37 . 9/1/2012
i cried. i cried.
i cannot
i actually cried to this fic.
It's so beautiful. I cried so many times throughout the story. I love you.
Chaosmos chapter 37 . 8/24/2012
AWWWWW!Sooooooooooo goooooooooooooood!just epicly awesomely fantasticly coool!
TT-TT..it made me all warm and fuzzy inside...TT-TT..the ending is epic!actually u dont see endings like this..and its beyond awesome! it really touched my heart..its making so warmy mushy feeling inside me..TT-TT..I am crying with over warminess..man DIS IS JUST GREAT!
xfang-girlx chapter 37 . 6/30/2012
This took me a while to read but I am glad to have finially finished it. :)

I liked Kino, she was an interesting OC. It was sad when her father, aunty and cousin were 'killed' and also when she was 'killed' as well. Kamen is one nasty shinigami. :)

All up, it was an enjoyable story. :D
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