I like this story, please keep writing.

Welcome back. Hope you continue to write. Great chpt.

poor tidus, i know how bad it feels to not be abe to play because of an injury. aha, hopefully he'll find yuna but ignore seymour's request. (it kinda reminds me of the plot of shrek a bit; how shrek has to get fiona for farquaad but he ends up saving her from him instead...that is, if you follow that route)

this is awesome please continue i love the story already!

i think it's great so far I can't wait to see more! _

WOW... This is actually a very original story. I havn't read anything like it... And trust me, I've read my fair shar of stories! LOL. This story is really catchy. I still think seymore is one creep. I'm actually glad Yuna ran away. I feel so sorry for Tidus though, He can't blitz. (Tear) Poor guy. Well maybe when he finds Yuna and falls in love he'll forget about blitzball. I can't wait to see where this story takes both Tidus and Yuna. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the new update XD Toodles

This looks interesting! :D

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Write more soon please :)

Good start. Too bad about his shoulder. I love how Tidus doesn't bow down to Seymour. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter, update soon.