Great backstory! :)

Thoughtful, sweet story. I really enjoyed it. (can't really see Ed as the artistic type, though )

This has to be one of the best stories ever written of younger Edward Elric!...I cried!...I feel like this is something that could have truly happend in the anime!

Aw, that was terribly sad, but wonderful nonetheless. It really gives you a sort of perspective on how Edward got the coat and when he first wore it. Good job!

this is very good, i really like it!

I liked the part about Ed learning how to sew too. Do you suppose he learned how to knit socks? And hey, SOMEBODY'S been fixing his coat after all those fights...

Thanks for the story!

Wow, I really liked this story. I thought you did a great job telling us how Ed came to have his iconic red coat. It was short but well done. I can really see something like this happening.