I really don’t like these kind of stories. Almost all the story is Kagome suffering thanks to Inuyasha rubbing it in her face with Kikyo. And in the last chapter when Kikyo turns out to be a sycophath he realizes he loves Kagome?! To hell with Inuyasha!

So just started reading this and find it weird, why do her hair, make up and clothing the day before then tell her to go to sleep. That better be magical make up and hair products to be able to not mess up after sleeping. There are a few things that I could nic pick at but instead I will keep them to my self for now until I read some more. So far even though I am interested

i hope u do an epilogue ignoring the time apart lol good story

I thought it was Inuyasha... *raises hand...* XD

I really enjoyed this! :D Great first chapter I'll continue reading

Its fucking,Kikyo huh?

I read ur authors note on chp1 and I agree with u about ur writting and I like the idea... its how I am writing my first fanffanfiction so everyone can see it in their own way and see the story differently

You can't just stop the story there without an epilogue! Its not right! It's like giving a child a lick of candy and then saying, "That's all you get, kid!" CRUELTY!

ok...bad ending in my opinion it just left of at a bad spot kinda disappointed the rest of the the story was fan-freaking-tastic just kinda expected more of an ending than that

Thanks for sharing

Okay... Firstly, Kikyo is acting WAY to ridiculous! Second, the ending is horrible. Inuyasha should've treated Kagome like a queen after all that shit he's done. The beginning was fantastic, but it all came to a downfall. THERE BETTER BE AN EPILOUGE!

Encour!
Epilogue epilogue!
Awesome! Loved it! Awesome!

love this story

More please! .

Holy cow, talk about a twist.