Oh my god. I hate this. Story's like this. It is not hard to rush out the words 'I did not write this. This was not me. I love you Edward' soooooo stupid.

Yhh completely ruined.

The last two chapters have completely ruined this story. Bella was a moron for choosing to go a date with mike, then not being up to decide on Edward then being an even bigger one for following Lauren around the fair like a lost pathetic puppy. Completely 180 to the Bella that wanted nothing to do with her. The Bella at the start. The Bella I liked.

Please write more, this is the most enticing fanfiction i've read in nearly 6 months so please writemore!

OMGsh! I'm glad they're alive and wish a speedy and restful recovery. I'll be waiting patiently when and if she gets the desire to write again.

I wish Bella would've stood up off herself a lot more.

I'd say too bad for Mike. He didn't call ahead. His lost.

I thought her ankle was broken? How is she supposed to go out?

Way to go Bella! Payback's a bitch, Lauren!

wow..I never realised this story wasn't finished. That's too bad, I really wanted to read more of this (and help you up to 2K reviews). Looking at your other stories it doesn't look like you're an active author anymore.

Hope you're okay (after the accident with your mother).

I'll keep this story on alert in case you start writing again, I'd love to read more and see how you pictured this ending.

All the best!

hmm okay I didn't quite guess it right! :)

HA! I got it right! He'd better not up and leave her without some explanation!

I did have my mind in the gutter and thought for a second I'd missed a bit in this chapter :)

I'm betting the mystery person is Lauren, who's writing a fake letter that Edward needs to return to war, or that his mother is sick and he needs to go home or something...I dunno, just guessing.

YAY!

I hope he'll explain why he said they should just be friends. Or is it typical Edward thinking he knows what's best for others. Wonder when she'll tell him she loves him. Exciting! I don't understand why you're not up to review count 2K though, I love this!