I just found this story, and I loved it! I’m sorry when you originally wrote it you felt you had to please the readers. I hope you learned to write for you, write your story, and the readers will come.
Great job!

Was very sceptical about this pairing, but this story was really cute.

Amazing fic you've written, I felt connected to Hermione, experiencing her pain. As for Marcus, I felt no empathy, I really wanted to punch him in the face, and I felt so much respect for Ron when he did so :) As of right now, this is the only fic that has ever made me want to injure a fictional character :-

So...this is one of the few fanfics I have read that actually made me cry! It was sooo wonderfully written, I could feel everything Hermione felt! Wonderful job! I love Marcus and Hermione!

This was fantastic. I loved the characterization, smut, and fluff. Excellent storytelling.

Aww, this was cute! Great job!

Really enjoyed this!

I don't know why but from my point of view it's not looking cute at all. I see that Marcus is stringing along Hermione by giving her mixed signals. Hermione is coming out to be so desperate even being shot down 3 times. Where's her self respect gone? It's kinda sad that after ignoring her for days she accepts him readily. You messed up her character horribly. And for what? Marcus Flint? Never read of him more than two sentences in harry potter or jn the movie. Really pathetic fic you've written.

Gotta say I never liked Ron, but right now... I'm so proud of him for punching Marcus in the face! He can wallow all he wants, he chose money over love.

Lovely story!

Love it!:')

Helloo, found your fic the other day. I loved it. Love your characters and story; think it ties it up nicely.
Very sad when they broke up, bloody hell! But very happy when they got back together.
I like how you shifted the povs of the two so we knew what each of them were thinking, rather than it being told from one side.

Oh nooo my heart broke, I felt the pain. Very good chapter

Utter perfection.

Sweet!