That was very cheesy, but it was also a very entertaining story. I liked it.

haha that was pretty cute! :)

Hmm a little grammer mistake in Mitchie's last line so that kinda spoiled the flow and it was really cheesy but it was a change :)

D That was sooo funny! I loved it! (Sorry you told me not to say that but that's what I say in a review!)

aww this is really cheesy but cute:)

i loved it the story was so cute and sweet

oh my goodness . i think this is the second or third time i've reviewed this because i can distinctly remember reading & reviewing this more than once .

i love Smichie in this ! this is so funny to because i was reading my friend really dirty pick-up lines so i was laughing a ton throughout this . this was so much fun to read again . this story i will never forget reading . its just so innocently cute , i wanna throwup and sing S Club at the same time :P

thanks for sharing this ! :)

lol. that was so funny. i loved the last one.

I love fics that make me laugh, and right now this is at the top of that long list, which contains mainly Kataang stories.

That good enough for ya?

It's short, but it's short with a CUTE FLUFFY ENDING!

“I must be a snowflake, because I've falled for you.”

It's supposed to be fallen, not falled, but still cute all the same.

I am the biggest cheese/mush ball!

“Okay...you must be Jamaican, 'cause Jamaican me crazy!” Shane cried, accenting his words by making sweeping motions with his hands. To put it bluntly, he looked ridiculous. I couldn't help it! It would work on me!

Haha!

Ohmygod, these stories are absolutely hilarious.

"“My lips are Skittles; wanna taste the rainbow?” he said, as seriously as possible."

Ohmy, what a dork.

O.o YAY

Haha I definately loved this

I think I've found thee best ever One-Shot writer.

Hm... yepp best ever

I loved the One-Shot haha Cheesy Pick-up Lines are the only kind ;)

Rach xox

awesome and hilarious!

-Zan

cute

-Smile