Looooooove it!

Good stuff.

I meant please visit: 213.

your oneshot was really great!

I like it but you could have added some dialouge between them and when James is arrogant while trying to impress Alice;)

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This is really good!

Another sweet one! LOVED it!

This was wonderful, and I love how you created a Longbottom child named after Neville's mum. Alice and James in your story are very likable, real people and I hope you will continue to write more of these two.

-Wotcher

Aw, this was adorable. I love the idea of James ending up with Neville's daughter. And this was just a very awesome take on it all. Very nice.

Wow, one of my major OCs is Alice Pomona Longbottom the II! I was quite surprised upon seeing this. I already have several stories about her posted, and a James/Alice pairing going on. I loved your oneshot here!

Winterlude, i just want to say thank you for your next generation stories. You are one of the few author on here that I think adequedly does them, all the next gen, justice. I adored this piece. I don't even know Alice but I feel like I do, seeing her through James eyes. I like the way you covered their whole life, yet kept it simple and sweet. Never thought about James ending up with a Longbottom, but now i kind of like that idea. A great read. Definetly added to the C2.

-honda

Aww. That was sweet. I never have read an Alice and James. So that was new for me, but I liked it! D

Aww this is really lovely & bittersweet. Great job!

- Gaby

Oh, I LOVED this. I wasn't sure at first, but the repetition works so well ... the small details, the little insights that only that special someone would know. Great job.

hi! it was a very good read. mild but very meaningful.

Cute. A mild sort of conflict, distanced. Smooth read. Snippets of personality...Maybe develop Alice's more?

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