Hitomo is too passive to be the protagonist. Anyone could replace and the exact same things will happen

Hitomi is so passive in this story, anyone could replace and the exact same things will happen

Thank you for doing that to Aizen and Momo. I really dont like them, so when you said she started screaming I laughed SO HARD!

...I got the pedo vibes for some reason

Oh my gosh please write more soon

Well we know why she cried as a baby and doesn't like certain people; because Aizen and Gin (thou actually he was a double double agent though in the end) were traitors. Though why did she cry at Momo?Mom is a nice girl and I'm still sad about how she died, and poor Hitsugaya...his face when she was killed...

Uh. I promise I won't shower you with reviews that are completely pointless but for some reason I posted that last review on the second chapter.
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I meant it to be on this chapter.
This chapter was amazing - not that the second one wasn't, but I meant to be talking about this one.

Oh my god. I started reading this story when I was eight. EIGHT.
I can't remember half the stuff I wrote to you, and I'm kinda glad I can't. I probably terrorized you.
I do remember this story though - it was one of my absolute favorites, and still is. Thank you so much for writing it, and for continuing it for so long!
I'd also like to apologize for anything I did when I was younger - I can't remember any of it but I was eight. That's probably a sign that I did /something/. And the things eight year olds do are normally not good things.

Loving the last part on how Ichigo just happened to show up at the last second I hope Grimmjow joins to fight along side Hitomi. by the way I'm soooh loving this I do hope you plan to continue on with this story.

Not to be rude, but for Hitsugay's sword its Rain over the frosted heavens! Hyorinmaru!

I hope she gets to see Grimmy, and her dad lets him live for her sake

I think that Grimmy might actually be warmer up to her

I do wonder who her birth parents are

love it so far

Leaving us in an amazingly epic cliffhanger ain't 'cha? Smart move. XD Amazing work as always! 3