I love this story...so sad it’s not going to be completed though. Author-sama how could you do that to us! That cliffhanger!

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Ryou and kaiba are fucking flirting

You should try downloading next chapter or at least the when they spill all their secrets and how do they react when bakura returns? I love you your story it's really interesting and mysterious I like stories like that

Please take this story down as it is abandoned. it doesn't need to be here.

Well... That was quite horrifying. You know, I had almost forgotten about the whole "increasing instability" thing with Ryou. I wonder how much worse it'll get before the others notice.

I love the continuous references to Slytherin house being like the Mafia, hilarious!
Kaiba has laid down some excellent points. He won't fall for any BS from his house mates. His comparison between the anti-Slytherin views and anti-Muggle views was pure gold!
Excellent job Marik! Good thing he has the Necklace, huh?

Ryou has a pet! Having one will definitely help him.
I love the banter in this fic so much!

Kaiba! I loved that line about him clinging to his laptop. Poor guy gets hit in the head by the Staff, starts seeing Yugi/Yami's spirit forms, and abruptly gets slapped in the face (metaphorically) by magic.
The Ring is in a towel with duck tape - that's just hilarious.
Hopefully Marik and Ryou are there already, so they'll have some (kind of?) friendly faces around after their ordeal.

My oh my, things are getting started! So, Lucius and co are headed to "Bill's" group but Bill isn't even there. I'm certain that Baggy is also a wizard, I wonder how many others at the dig-site are wizards? Not that it'll help much *consternation*. Except Ryou and Malik are there. I doubt they'll let the Death Eaters just do whatever they want.
Speaking of the Duelists, I bet Ryou is getting some feedback from his yami - could that card be a warning? Or a reach for some company after being locked in the Shadows? The feelings of loneliness point to the latter.
lol, Yami/Yugi Dueling Kaiba to stave off boredom.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHYY

Why do I strongly feel like the Ryou in this story accurately represents me minus cool backstory and Yami?

I really wish that you hadn't abandoned this story. It's one of my favorites from they ygo/hp category.

I really hope someone has adopted this story! ;w;

This was beautifully written and had an amazing gripping plot. You did a very good job with it.