Wow, amazing! I know you said it's hard to write serious compared to crack stories but I think your story is a much needed breath of fresh air among all of said crack stories. I think you captured Lelouch and CC perfectly and showed the romance in the perfect way for them. I wish there were more stories out there as romantic yet characteristically sound as this one, and I'll definitely be looking out for your other work. Write on!

ahhhh I mean awwww

awe!

Sweet. :)

I think you got their characters perfectly spot on. I know Lelouch isn't usually soft, but he's shown to have a soft spot for both Nunnally and C.C. Anyway, this was really sweet! I really like how Lelouch was there for C.C., because yes, he does care for her, despite being overly selfish at times. Your descriptions were very well-done and beautiful. They really helped me to see what was going on in my head.

Great job! :D

I'm really sure that C.C.'s the type of person that will never show emotion (even in sleep, probably due to centuries of solitude). Great story, hoping for more from you!

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That was beautiful. Keep up the good work.

Midnight Leo

Very Good Story.

So sweet. You did a great work! Loved it! :)

I think that was the perfect setting for Lelouch to show his care for her.

this was quite good

hi:)

The setting of the story is really simple, but the way things are described makes it memorable. It sort of puts the reader inside the room with C.C and Lelouch. I also liked the fact the the characters stay close to how they were portrayed in the anime. Smooth language,too. Please do keep writing. Thanks for the enjoyable read. 3

I think this was truly amazing. I commend thee ;)

I thought this was very sweet!