Well that escalated quickly! Great story, very original!

What. The. Fuck?!

Wow. I wasn't expecting that. So good!

I was really not expecting the ending... Anyways, this is a really great story. I enjoyed it very much.

Wow! This was a really unique story. Really, really good job~ :)

Wow. I really loved this.

However, you need to give warning that the ending is, uhm, not quite... happy. Because the story is saved under Romance/SciFi and not Horror/Tragedy/Drama, people think it's a happy story.

But I did love it. Great job bro!

That was a kind of scary and unexpected ending but this story was really good. I really liked the idea of it.

Uhm...wow. I don't even know what to say...and I don't mean that in a bad way. I was definitely entertained by this story and the ending completely caught me off-guard. Disturbed me a little. I cracked up at the absurdity of it.

*Wanders off in a daze*

I don't see why everyone is flipping out over the last scene. I almost didn't read it because of that, but I am so glad I did.

This story is fantastic. To everyone reading reviews: Read this story. The heart thing doesn't even go into detail, it's kept simple and symbolic.

I love this AU. I read at least one Axel/Roxas AU a week, and this has been one of my favorites. Axel is just so strange and quirky, what's not to love about that?

That was...that came out of NOWHERE. I did not see that coming, I mean wow. That was an awesome story but if that wasn't a suckerpunch I don't know what is (although I admit I've never SEEN a suckerpunch). I'm not saying it's not amazing 'cause it is. But I can honestly say thar I did not see that coming.

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SCARY

REALLY SCARY

I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT ENDING

[hyperventilates]

Okay, I'm calm now. This universe is interesting and they're nicely in-character.

ASDF ROXAS' HEART GOT EATEN

Okay, I'm calm, I'm calm. The ending was unexpected (although I suppose it wasn't, really, what with Axel eating the pig's heart earlier) and scary. If that was what you were aiming for, then you have succeeded. Definitely. Awesome writing. Awesome story. Very scary. asdfnightmarefuelforme.

NO. No... NO.

(The story was amazing, the way you write is very descriptive and beautiful.)

WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU- WHY- WHY WOULD IT END- LIKE. THAT.

Axel... ATE... Roxas. D: I was excited for the ending. I put on dramatic music like usual for endings, the piano version for that one song by Linkin Park, AND THEN HE EATS HIS EFFING HEART.

asdfghjkl; Mind raped. Not willing, mind you, NOT WILLING.

(Poor Roxas and Axel. Great story though. BUT WHAT WOULD COMPEL YOU TO END IT LIKE THAT?)

Wow...

Interesting idea and honestly not the ending I expected!

Actually, a MUCH better one then I had expected!

Awesome job!

Wow, what a shocking ending. Poor Roxas barely had time to comprehend what was going on. I wonder what will happen to Axel now? This was wonderfully suspenseful from start to finish, and I loved the canon details (Sora's name change, their Organization numbers, the obsession with hearts, the Dusks). Great job.

Amazing really. That's what this is. It mixes up everything in the KH series, and puts it in a weird new setting. I aplaud you. ;)