NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU THIS IS ONE OF THE WORST SCENES IN WARRIORS!

i don't blame heather paw for fainting

I wonder what smokefeather needs to tell ragged storm

oooooooooh

OMG right some for more I'm loving this story! #CLIFHANGER

Nice story so far. :)

This was written amazingly and is my favorite fan fiction I've read but it saddens me it was never finnished much like most good fictions. I hope you didn't stop writing because you thought it was bad because it was great. I don't expect you to read this but I hope you do.

I wrote a one-shot of what happened to Bright and Swifty like chapter one. It was a bit different, but I like yours too.

Kindly write the next chapter please and what all that that ravenstar said that she lost another life in battle was it the battle or the berries in the bad fish or did she lose 2 lives that day

Thank you

Oh no. What's Foxpaw the bitch doing now?

Excellent as always. I'm quite a fan of this.

POST SOON...OR ELSE something BAD will happen to this teddy bear *holds teddy bear over volcano*...u also need to post the prolog of the second book with the wolves in it..u left it in a cliffie:[ post or teddy and this cookie will get it MUHAHAHA

Wolf'sbane

p. u like evanesence?if u do..whats ur favorite song..mine is Lithium or Lacromossa

:o cliffy! this is an outrage!lol

I really like this one!

This was very famililar. Nice writing.

oh no! oh and cats cant bluch can they? and they cant really smile... never mind really good story! please check out ours,

RainstormXX