I really loved this story. You wrote both characters very well and I liked the insight that you provided into their thoughts. Great job on this.

two-thumbs up ,

Wah! SOO GOOD! SO much thinking, really good vocab and grammer.

Im impressed.

Great story :D

That was awesome and very well written! I love the last lines:

"Just a few months ago, he had never believed that she would be more to him than a girl who happened to work for the same agency he did, and now . . . 'Just look at us. Just look at me.'"

Beautiful!

Ciao!

Oh, that was SO GOOD! it was great seeing that situation from their point of view, a little more in depth than the manga has it at. I really liked it!

i have nothing to say but wow that was the best one i have ever read by far, i hope you contuine you to write fanfics for this catagory

your language is FABULOUS! :D i was really impressed with the level of english you used. the story sounded professional. though a little boring cause it is pretty much of a recap, but i found you brought out their emotions well. (:

love, pinkkish

sweet! i bet ren was actually thinkin of that! make another one plese!

Awesome! LOVE. I just love the thoughts you have them expressing. I do see a few things differently re: the relationship, when it came to the end, but I don't care...I love seeing it expressed in a new way.

It's great. I'll definitely always read all your Skip Beat fics. :)