why the fuck he want to become hokage and protect village with that treatment?

i hope they become buddy,, and not force like original

He has Kisame defeated and instead of just finishing it with the sword or Kunai, he decides to use a Jutsu that seems to take 2 min and he loses all battlefield awareness, that was ridiculous.

I like it.

RE to NekoCross: I don’t think you understand what the word ‘review’ actually means. These so-called hate comments are just people reviewing, giving their opinion on the story or on particular aspects of the story. Just because their opinions are negative or are opinions you personally don’t agree with don’t make them any less valid.

Why is his eye jade instead of black you know like the color of the eyes the was originally they don’t change color when you transfer them

What the fucks with this attitude change

I really like the way you write, the vocabulary you used was spot on and your pacing was perfect. Some small grammar errors but I can overlook them. Good job

I don’t get it. You’re just another one of those Author’s who decide to ruin a amazing story by added a pointless pairing that isn’t needed AT ALL. The story would’ve went on fine if you’d just left it with Naruto trying to become stronger etc. but the Yugito/Naruto pairing honestly ruined this great book and I can’t force myself to read on. If you need to reply my email is;

Sucks people are hating in this guy. Like if you don't like it, stop bitching, stop reading and continue with your life. No one is forcing you to read this. Like lol just shut up with hate comments

I will never understand why so many people obsess over Naruto/Yugito pairing. She is such a bland and generic character...

There is a difference between between being hardened and being a dick this version of naruto is the same reason why I hate sasuke in canon.

Bro this is a fucking fantastic story

NANI?What shoot out?

You completely lost narutos personality even with knowledge it wouldnt change into this pile of shit