updattteeeee!

lmao nipple i can see why it was so hard to write that word :) but ANYWHO the story is amazing i cant wait to read what happens next. Does Sephy go insane and what happens to Zack when he goes to the lifestream thing lol So please update whenever you can :)

Oh yes.. Moderately kinky Cloud is awesome. I can't believe I missed this for so long! You see.. what happened was I had accidentally moved it to one of my folders I guess a while back and just today I happened to glance to that folder and saw there was an unread one which, with that folder, there shouldn't have been, so I checked and found this. *frowns at self* Don't know how that happened but, hey.. at least I found it. XD. Can't wait for more!

Oh sweet lemony goodness XD

I love Your story • Keep up the Good work "cheers" _

oh gaia that was hot but it was a major pitty that cloud wasnt a vergin that would have been better but still that was epic and i cant wait for the next chapter please update soon

I feel sorry for Zack with all the fainting going on...Lol but anyway,nice story.Ü I feel sorry for granny..Anyway I hope Sephiroth will continue not turning bad...

Keep it up. :)

Mwahahaha The sexy part hath COME! mwahahahah :D

I am a VERY happy fangirl right now.

Sorry? Pray tell, For WHAT, exactly?

This is awesome! :)

On the contrary there's nothing wrong with a nice squishy scene now and then.

Awwww~~! :D

Another great chapter!

I was laughing SO HARD! Awesome job! This is so amusing! :D

And trojan? Yeah, icky nasty stuff. grr.

May this funny pic somewhat ease the past annoyance: just remove the stuff with the mentioned symbols and remove the brackets. this site sucks when it comes to posting links. *kicks ffnet*

http[colon slash slash] .

...Hope that works.

*crosses fingers*

I'm off to read the next chapter! :D

Heh, hilarious chapter! I could NOT stop laughing. I really am enjoying this so far. :)

Ummei? I'm pretty sure the Japanese word for destiny is unmei. Or did you just make it up? Well, either way is fine. Close enough! :D

Take care.

Yeah, I did notice that. Thanks for mentioning it though, now I can look froward to a surprise of sorts for your reasoning behind the color change. :)

And hey, a quirky Seph is STILL an awesome Seph. I was chuckling quite a bit at the Hair color quirk. heheh lol

Great job!

Take care. :D

Hehehehee, that is a hard word to write, isn't it? Heheh...nipple...

Well, yes. This is blissfully extraordinary. I love how the story is progressing!

The relationships with each of the characters in fun to read, and Sephiroth's love for Angeal was heartbreaking to read about. Absolutely heartbreaking! I could feel my heart shattering into tiny bits when I was reading that part, I swear!

Update soon, and bring more Tseng and Reno into the story, please!

Both boderately kinky Cloud and you are 3 Reading this fic is one hell of a delight 3 Thank you :)

I love the idea of Zack not being Clouds first. Good work darling! It seems that virgin Cloud is not nearly as fun as his potential evolved form "Moderately kinky Cloud"!

I adore moderately kinky Cloud! .

Please continue! The plot is so intriguing.

Update soon or I may implode!