Ryou in this fanfic reminds me of Vector from Yugioh Zexal. Because Vector pretended to be innocent Ray Shadows but turns out to be evil Vector. I think that Evil Ryou would be great friends with Vector.

The journals made me feel anxious... You are truely a talented, spectacular writer. This story got under my skin. Well done, my friend.

I do hope you continue this amazing fic soon, there's not too long to go and I'm still silently cheering for you to one day come back to this 3 I don't mind how long it takes to end, i'll be looking forward to it everyday :3

This was very interesting, to say the least. I hope you update soon!

Omg I silently cried without knowing whilst reading this, your works leave such an impact on me, and i love you so much for that 3

Absolutely love this story. Hope Mariku fails in his plans to kill Ryou. (I like drama and dark endings.)
Keep up the good work.

wow! your story is amazing in a beautifully twisted way i haven't been able to stop reading (which almost got me in trouble while reading it on my kindle under the desk in college but oh well) i really hope you update soon :D

Moonlight X

I love your story! BTW, does ryou have acrotomophilia?

Holy sh*t! That is some morbid stuff. I don't normally cuss, but the level of thought in here is crazy scary. Total 5 star piece! Absolutely amazing, disturbing and thought provoking. I love your work!

I hope you write more soon "

please stop writing this utter abomination, this is one of the worst things I've ever seen, I am actually gagging reading this, please stop you are sick

Oh my goodness did you draw that picture?

I loved it. So much. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Thanks So much for updating! I'm really looking forward for the next chapter. Hope it comes soon!

It's hard to even know what to put in this review, since there's so much I loved and could comment on... Well, now we know Ryou's always been a freak. It was an interesting deviation from Mariku's perspective. I thought the smut was great, honestly. And this line killed me: "I hope Malik can feel it while I fuck you." It took me awhile to recover from that and keep reading. I look forward to the rest of the story!