Please write an additional chapter! It’s so good I’m in tears!

So I didn't really understand why Sasuke worked in a brothel if he simly could to inside and kill Orochimaru. And why did he take Naruto with him. He didn't serve as a destraction at all.

This reminded me of the brothel scene with Mugen from Samurai Champloo... Even the title is from the show so i can't help but wonder if that's where you got your inspiration from?

Anyway i liked the story, it was well written :)

A very disappointing ending !
Why did u end it like that :/

Hell yeah love this fict

I have read this a few times and loved it every time. I love the ending and find it very satisfying. However, I also know that any kind of sequel that you came up with would also be treasured. Introducing Naruto into Sasukes home-life could be highly amusing... just a thought.

why can't sasuke just invites naruto home? he knows that naruto is homeless, and with naruto's talent he can always help sasuke in missions! like partners. or for naruto to offer himself saying the likes of i'm awesome and great, i can assist your being a ninja. you'll need my help. something like that.

and it's obvious that they want to stay together somehow. and i find it unrealistic for naruto to just leave and left sasuke like that. i'm sure that if he likes and wants someone enough, he'll stay with that person (sasuke) like glue no matter what.

Oh how I hoped you wouldn't leave the story there, it was so bittersweet and heart breaking! But nonetheless, I loved the story!

Great fanfic, i really like the plot, and well you don't fall into "cliché" what I was a bit afraid of with the brothel story. It was also well written.

hmm a relly intresting story i liked the it's rialistic one

Here's your review :D

The fic was overall quite entertaining. It could have been longer and more evenly-paced and all the extra passages and compairsons like the one about Victorian romance, not related to the plot or the setting, could have used a bit more trimming, because the mood of the fic calls for more direct, in your face approach.

Naruto and Sasuke had fun dynamics, without actually turning into Jin and Mugen.

The sex scene was realistic without being too realistic or tasteless.

:D

Very interesting read! Like how the story and their relationship progressed. Not too fasst or too slow. Naruto is so uncouth but sasuke likes him either way. Great work!

wow! your are an amazing writer! naruto and sasuke never cease to amuse me in any cenerio. i appluad for your talents great work! -

I love this story!

*o*

You did a really good fic! *o*

I loved the fight scenes! You did it really well! *o*

Congratulations for the good story! D