Good, why is it unfinished? It' cruel(

i could sense a bias and unfairness... ill stop reading. i am beginning to hate mars.

please update soon really love this story so far
cant wait for the next chapter

PLEASE UPDATE I love this story :)

Update soon please really like this story
Can't wait to see what happens nexT!

Update please reallylike this

Really really love this story update soon please

This is a great story. It has suspense and you make the charcters feel real. It's really good.

So I just stumbled across this story while searching fanfiction and I have spent all of my time reading this ever since! Anddd then there were no more chapters left to read! :(

But you promised not to leave this story unfinished so I shall add this story to story alerts and sit patiently and wait for an update. :D

By the way did I mention that this story is absolutely AWESOME! No? Well, this story is absolutely AWESOME! And I hope you update sooooonnn! XD

AWWWWWWWWWWW! I LOVE THIS STORY! I know life can take up all of our time, but please update! This is beautiful, I love this story! And I love how you've nailed everyone's personality down.

Yey! Jadeite knows Minako I love that too, lol sorry I didn't review on every single chapter (I should have lol) but I just had to keep reading and see where it went. Oh please update soon! Of course my favorite couple is and always will be Kunzite and Minako, but I think it's really cute how you've written out everyone else's relationship :D.

Well I hope to read something soon ;) pwweeeeassse?

Wonderful chapter! I have to say I love Mamoru's reaction, and his need to protect her.

Yay, a new chapter. Good one too.

The scene between them was intense. I'm so liking the analytical Usagi, trying to determine which method to use. I felt sad for both, since they both tried too hard but it still didn't work.

Look forward to the next chapter, whenever it may be.

Your grasp of the characters has gotten stronger since the beginning of your story, and it was fairly strong to begin with. Minako, Aphrodite, Venus - they all strike me as the one(s) to be the last one(s) standing, the final contenders in life, love, and war. "Never go down without a fight!"

Which makes me adore this Venusian. Like a near impossible game to win, almost like all the cards are stacked against you. But it's still possible to win despite that - and the prize at the end is worth all the trouble. That's how I see the leader of the Senshi in your story thus far. So her reaction near the end of this chapter was actually expected, and it relieved me to no end that she DIDN'T concede.. yet.

But that didn't stop it from being any less terrifying to read. It was like watching a child's crumbling walls of sand come apart - then suddenly become cold walls of diamond within seconds of Usagi's minor slip up. I felt the moon princess' distress and sadness at her guardian's harsh words.

But above all else I was enthralled. Your technical usage of each character's different names ingrained a type of "switch" in my mind. For instance, when you use "Minako" my mind thinks of the bubbly, boy-crazy-girl and some softer emotions such as friendship and humor. When "Aphrodite" is used, I see a woman who doesn't do anything halfway and I'm introduced to a plethora of emotions that are akin to drinking hard liquor - the headache/hangover at the end of it is to be expected. And then there's "Venus", the leader and above all else the woman who's efficiency and intensity may make her seem like she's colder than Mercury's ice.

The different moods in correlation to what names you use has become an absolute necessity to this story.

So thus far you have me on the edge of my seat. I'll be looking forward to your next update! Great job!

I am really really loving this story, I can't wait to see where it goes. It may be weird, but I haven't seen my boyfriend in a really long time, and somehow reading this made it seem a little easier to deal with missing him. I'm not sure if that makes any sense, but it's true, and I can't wait to read more _;

I love this story. I really enjoy stories about the senshi and th Shitenou. Also I like your writing style. When are the two sides going to meet? because surely they will have a few things to work out in their new lives and the new version of their romance. Keep writing. You are very good.