Sexually Abusive Setsuna,quite creative and I like it!Pls continue to update,I wanna see what outcome will happen with Setsu like that though

a lot of people were requesting for PART 2 im one of them although it seems impossible i will definitely hope

That was just... Whoa, not an original reaction I know. But I'm not sure how to write out my feelings for this story. Yeah it was excellently written and I enjoyed it, but that doesn't cover how I feel. Of course this was a totally different take on a KonoSetsu story, I mean Setsuna abusive, no one would have seen that coming. When I first read the summary I was curious and shocked so I clicked on it. As I read my jaw dropped When Setsuna first forced herself on Konoka. It was so out of charecter, yet it hurt me to read it. When one of your favorite characters, a supposed 'good guy' does something bad, and I mean extremely bad, it shocks you. No matter if it's fiction or not, I felt like I was pulled into the story, and although I don't know the pain of being abused by a loved on, I felt like I was there in her shoes watching what happening, only an observer but still feeling bad for her, wanting to do something but can't. So I guess that's how I feel in a nutshell. I feel like I got a little poetic on you for a minute there. Anyway I think if you ever get around to, or if you want to, you definietly make a part two because you ended it with a HUGE cliff-hanger. It left room for the reader to reflect on the story and think what happens next and make up their own ending, but I still would like to know how you would resolve this. Thanks for the great read, your writing never ceases to amaze me.

MC over and out

Wow... just, wow. How to review a story such as this? It throws a whole new spin on the relationship of the two. Yes, Konoka still loves Setsuna, but said swordswoman is an aggressive, controlling, overbearing, abusive, monster. Unfortunately, these kinds of relationships are generally men towards women, but every so often it is reversed, and in this case it's one woman to another. In almost all instances, though, the party on the receiving end stays silent through all the abuse (both physical and mental), even claiming to love the other and refusing to press charges or seek aid when the truth is brought to light. All too often, that abuse escalates until the one being abused is irreparably harmed in some way, again often leading to hospitalization or worse.

This fic is a sad commentary on the lonely plight of one in such a relationship, and the feelings, fears, wants, and hates that are experienced by a person in Konoka's position. At once she is desirous of Setsuna's attention, yet also fearful of what would happen when they are alone. She wishes for her 'love', and 'loves' her in return, yet is heart-broken when she truly realizes that she is little more than a play-thing, a way to relieve lusts or stress, an object. Still, she takes her back, pushing away the help they both require, thinking all will be fine, that the monster might change, might come to love her in return - not realizing the position she is putting herself in. Now, Setsuna knows that others are aware of the happenings, the abuse. She already said that Konoka could not go anywhere without her there if others are around, it is only a matter of time until she states in no uncertain terms that Konoka can no longer associate with ANYone else, thus controlling her completely.

All in all, a powerful story with strong meanings and messages about relationships gone HORRIBLY wrong. Those in such relationships need immediate help, and this shows the right of it. Although scary in it's message and implications, this fic was well done.

We are all obviously waiting for a sequel, don't keep us waiting :)

1 word... WOW.

I dont think setsuna would do that to konoka and it hurts me very much that this went on in the story im going to see if theres a part 2 and this was just great ...pefect story keep it up

U SURE IT'S COMPLETE? I WANT MOAR!

Definitely one of the more interesting Konosetsu stories I have ever read. Very interesting how you portrayed Setsuna as the dominant one in the relationship.

I LOVE THIS STORY! SPEED KILLZ YOU HAVE TO KEEP IT GOING. I'VE BEEN SEEING IF YOU MADE A NEW CH. OF THIS BUTYOU HAVEN'T AND IT'S MAKING ME CAEZYS PEOPLE COMEON. I'M DIEDING HERESPEED KILLZ KEEP GOING WITH THE STORY OR AT LEAST SAY IS OK FOR SOMEONE ELSE TO FISHT THIS STORY. I MEAN PEOPLE ARE DIEDING TO KOWN WHY SETSUNA IS LIKE THIS AND WITH DOES KAEDE DO TO SETSUNA. OR DOES SETSUNA HURT KONOKA AS THEY TALK. AND DOES THE OTHERS FIND OUT LIKE SHIZUNA,ASAKURA,KU FEI,NEGI, AND ASUNA. AND IF YOU OR SOMEONE ELSE NAKES A NEW CH. PUT AYAKE INIT I WHAT TO SEE WHAT SHE DOES WHEN SHE FINDS OUT. AND JUST HOW OLD ARE THIS GUYS...OR AT LEAST SETSUNA SEX! AND ALCOHOL! THATS COLL AND VERY BAD AT THE SAME TIME...IS SETSUNA OLDER THEN THE OTHER AS WILL? HOW IS THAT GIRL NAMED RIISR TOO AND DOES SHE KOWN SETSUNA AND WHY IS SETSUNA NICE TO HER AND NOT TO ANYONE ELSE...OH ONE LAST THING HOW DOES SETSUNA FEEL FOR KONOKA AND WHAT THE HELL IS WOREG WITH SETSUNA TO MAKE HER SO MAEN AND NOT CARL WHAT SHE'S DOING OR WHAT THE OTHERS WILL DO TOO HER IF OR WHNE THEY FIND OUT HER LITTLE THING WITH POOR KONOKA! PLAESE FISNSE THE STORY SONEONE! I'LL DIED IF I DONT KOWN WHAT HAPPENS TO SETSUNA AND KONOKA AND THE OTHERS PEOPLE PLASES!

This story was really amazing. I found myself unable to hate setsuna. I kept thinking that she must be doing this for a reason or that even though she was doing that she still loves konoka deep down. I didnt want to believe setsuna could do that. And then I realized that I was thinking the exact thing konoka was telling herself.

rare but well made!

that was unusual...a very good fanfic

i hope that this story have a sequel...

im looking forward to it...

awesome! honestly i had no idea wat 2 think and i cant really hate setsuna. i mean i think setsuna got abused when she was younger like it seems she cares but its hard bc she changes. konoka would nvr stop loving her... i think setsuna needs help. i mean setsuna gets jealous really fast. y cant i hate her even though she does this? anyway awesome story. i really want a 2nd ch but i dont think ull give us one...dam...

peace!

That was so good! But, please, I really want to know how it ends. SEQUEL!