Brilliance is what this story is. My only complain is that it ended. I know it's as good as abandoned, but I'm hoping it's because you ventured into professional writing and not because you lost interest in the story.

Your writing style is absolutely beautiful and intense. I'll have to look for more fics like this, even though I don't think there is one. Sigh.

Was brilliant as long as it lasted. Just brilliant.

I wish you would continue!

*overcome with the overwhelming desire to take L back to Watari and protect him forever*

I love the way you write. The transition between dialogue and L's thoughts at times is just. So great.

... What's the way out of the Watari issue? Also holy fuck this is so so so great

This is everything I've always wanted oh my gog it's beautiful.

Hi there. Not sure if you're still around but I just wanted to let you know you had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. I love this story. Hope you might come back one day. Thanks.

Great chapter! I like seeing both of their perspectives in the story.

Great concept and story so far! I love the line about L and Light being opposites in that L is bad with normal behavior and Light is bad with emotion.

this is honestly my life. i have never read a more perfect fanfiction than this. this was what i needed, this is everything

NOOOOOOO! Don't end this here, please! I can't stand not knowing what happens! This is probably the best LxLight fic I've ever read! Please update soon!

No, no, NO! Please don't stop here. Did they get back together?! Omg please don't leave them sad. I cannot stand Light (my baby) from looking so miserable, so depressed. L you bastard how could you want him yet reject him at the same time.

This story is absolutely fantastic. If I were to rate it, it would be off the chart (in a good way). I felt so devastated after finishing reading this. Not many fics are able to touch me or make me feel. So thank you for breaking my heart. :'(

I have commented before, but have been re-reading parts of your story today, and truth be told, this is the single most arousing text written by anyone, ever. I would chop off my right hand to be able to write like you. You're amazing. Wow.

I really like this story and the way you make the characters' rather complicated emotions evolve gradually! I hope one day you're going to finish this because it really kept on getting better and better with each chapter!

Oh, and another thing; I am also sad that everyone hates Light. He's got deadly charisma and absolutely charming slasher smile, y'know?