this was truly great , that is until the end when she talks about sauske ! that was totally unnecessary , as a Narusaku fan i dont want to know that , you are making a story about narusaku ,you should have let naruto be her first . well i guess it was good overall but that killed my enjoyment by a huge margin .

J'aime beaucoup.

i loved it the best post was the ending "only you can make me feel that wayyou are a really great writer plz dip more

Nurse insulin stat! Gonna be honest when I saw the name of the story my head was already in the gutter. The fact you made the line actually cute lovey-dovey instead of raunchy and smutty was awesome.

Dawwwwwww the feels! This was really sexy and yet also sweet.

I love it

Awesome, that was amazing :D

I Like!

That was great! I loved it! Keep up the good work!

This is the best lemon i have EVER read and i have read A LOT of lemons. Keep up the good work. Your style and detail and your grasp of the experience the two lovers share is written to perfection. I rarely say this but you have a real talent at this and i hope i see a lot more of your one-shots. Also i would like to say Thank-You for sharing this exquisite piece of Literature with me.

It was good and I'm glad Sakura broke up with Sasuke i dislike that pairing.

holy shit that was an amazing read! trust me ive been through some of the worst on this site and this is easily in my numerous tie for 1st. You have an amazing sense of pace and thats what so many people lack. If any thing I could add try to add more inter related dialogue. People talk alot during sex so to me this is damn near perfect you did an amazing job

Hehe that was pretty good. Id like to see a multichapter narusaku story from you. Something with a little more build up.

oh that was a really well made lemon. not so many rude offensive words...i try to make a lemon like this one but somehow they dont turn out right..(sweat drop)

that made my nose bleed lol