| Reviews for Destiny Unfolds |
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   AriReo chapter 4 . 6/18 This is an amazing story. Just, wow. Quality work, here. Good job. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/6/2018 Uruk Hai |
| Aditya chapter 5 . 8/6/2018 Aragorn |
| aditya chapter 4 . 8/6/2018 Aurors, reappeared, Fiendfyre |
| aditya chapter 3 . 8/6/2018 Armour |
| aditya chapter 2 . 8/6/2018 Another spelling mistake Diagon Alley |
| aditya chapter 1 . 8/6/2018 there are spelling mistakes The corrections are Sectumsempra, Remus and Severus |
| kiko chapter 6 . 4/25/2018 very good story, i like it |
| kelwin chapter 7 . 11/27/2016 not good if you are going to let morgoth free then middle earth will be distroid. the valar will not let him be free cause no one there can fight him as his power is grater than theres. he was one of the valar if you read the history and the other books. so middle earth will end because the valar would come in anger and put him back. good idea but it would end with the end of the world. |
| btlmotormouth chapter 14 . 7/7/2016 I love what I I have read of this so far and would have loved to have read more. |
| pwah chapter 2 . 3/9/2015 not good |
| IAmOutOfIdeas chapter 3 . 2/9/2015 God you make so many mistakes name-wise, it's REMUS damn if, get this shit right |
| IAmOutOfIdeas chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 It's Severus It's Sectumsempra And there are a few more mistakes I don't feel like correcting for you. |
| Randomreader chapter 14 . 1/22/2015 wait I do have one suggestion- write what you think is fun to write. Not fun for your audience, fun for YOU. Clearly you're not getting paid to make your audience happy here, so do it for the fun. |
| randomreader chapter 14 . 1/22/2015 I do hope you havent given up on this story. It looks like its brewing into a great one, I actually got chills reading about the wave of power from Harry's oath. I wish I had an idea to share that might inspire you to write more, but you already took most of the things I hoped to see in a harry potter/lotr crossover and put them in this story! |
