This is really great! I'm dying to read more if the backstory you've created, as it is so fascinating and interesting. I see that it has been quite a while since you've updated, but I really hope you can finish this story!

I love this… it's such a wonderful after story, and has so much of what I've always wanted in one. I'm just sad it doesn't seem to be continuing. If this is canceled, you should probably make it official so people who might still be waiting won't be hoping for nothing. I'm not trying to be mean or stuck up, I just wanted to let you know.

UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Yakko cares SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH for his sibs.

Will Wakko be okay?

You go Warnes!

OKAY...

OF COURSE HE ATE IT. THAT'S WAKKO FOR YA...

This is such a great story. I wish you had been able to finish it, but I understand life getting in the way. Definitely gonna follow this story just in case you decide to pick it back up one day!

oh please do continue. i thought that it was kinda mean that the queen just left him like that. anyway, please please please please continue. this is an amazing story and you are a fantastic writer. dont ever stop.

I love how you depict the Warners' royal life. With Yakko finding the journal, the trip, Dot's prior illness, Wakko's prior mission, etc.

Poor Wakko. :( S'not fun being sick...

Fun to steal the journal, though. Ehehehe...

Good job keeping them in character. The bond they share with each other is very strong and this helps show it.

Keep it up! 8DDDDD

Do you plan on finishing this story? Seriously girl, how dare you write an amazing story and then forget about it. I mean the story is so well thought out and I just have to know what happens. This is just cruel and unusual punishment. :(

I reviewed other chapters then came back to this one...tell me that this story doesn't just end at chapter 8. I mean sorry but wtf! first you write this fantastic story with a good plot going and you just stop right after they kiss! Maybe you intend to continue, and i'd really encourage you to do so, but when it's been a couple years i'd say you just stopped. I'm very upset...i don't know how to feel about this

I'm in love with this story. I'm no professional, but the detail is enough to get a basic image in your head while still leaving some to the imagination. I love the fact that it's going between not only past and present but the Warner's and their parents to be POV. Your writing style is good and the story is well thought out, keep it up!

It took me a while to get into the story, I've read a lot of Animaniacs stuff and it can either be really good to the point i'm obsessed or so awful i'm offended for them. I was also a little upset at first. I remembered that their father is Sir William the good so I was creeped out and confused when she was married to Maximus. I just now remembered the bed time story of how Dot came to be...Sir William was a 'big brave and strong' knight. I have no idea if that was intended or not, but i'm loving the story currently. It'll be one of my favs right up there with Family by the middle warner sibling. I've seen both of your stuff on deviantART too; really good.