Good Story.
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Just found this, and, oh my! That was nice! :)

I liked it how Tim took the initiative: now or . And Tony's remark at the end. Surprise at witnessing this new side of his Probie.

McGiva suits me really fine. Like this a hell lot better than slash. Tastes for more.

uhhhmmmm... wow... wish it would have been me... with Ziva

Oh my. Nice!

Mmmmm Nice ;) Would have loved to see more Giva action

Way to go McGee! Loved it!

m hot! well done!

I've read 3 and 4 but this was 5 and part of me feels like Gibbs got shortchanged. Especially since I would have picked him for the dominant in the group. And with boys out numbering girls it wouldn't have hurt for them to show some interest in each other too.

OMg this is too much! I loved it :)

Damn not only was it hotter than all get out, that last line had me on the floor laughing. I could totally see Tony winding up Tim just to get everybody hot. That would make for an interesting show! ;)

Wow! Hot and funny all rolled into one :-)