I like your little drabble of Edmund believing Lucy. He really learned his lessons from not believing her he first time she visited Narnia.

Awesome work. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.

This is where Edmund the Lucy, the youngers almost took the right path, and the others, older ones, took the wrong one. Sad, but... wow, beautiful piece!

Yes, yes! Ed and Lu. When Edmund believes Lucy has got to be my favorite moment in all the Narnia books . . . And movies, too! And this fic made that moment stand out even more by giving it something to add to it like this piece. Simply excellent, excellent job! :) God bless you.

I like that.

-Dyslexic Nerd

Super cute! Exactly how I would've imagined (or hoped/really wanted) that scene continuing. Great job! :)

J

Cute brother sister moment and also written very nicely.

Nice little one-shot.

Aw! That was so sweet!

XD Gosh, Peter's so CRANKY in this movie!

I love how Ed believes Lu! That's one of my favorite parts of the movie, and I LOVE that movie! XD

Rock on! This was awesome! U *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)

That was so amazing! Loved how you wrote Edmund and his belief in Aslan and his sister. Awesome!

I love this part in the movie, and I think you captured it well. Of course with your own style. Very nice job. I only wish it would've been longer.

Two thumbs up!

:) Great little OneShot, that. i loved it.

Love Bundi

lovely. it's one of my favorite scenes in the movie and you did a great job with the edmund lucy thing. great job!

i just love how edmund believes lucy and protects her,even he is mean to her sometimes

I always loved how Ed believed Lucy. You've done a great job capturing that scene here.

-Something in his eyes change subtly, and the dark questioning turns to light longing, and decision.-One of my favorite lines.

-It is still empty. And yet… The boy wraps an arm around his sister, pulling her closer as they follow the others. Silently both think, hope, pray: Aslan.-My other favorite line.

Good job!