Well done!

Well written and I look forward to every new chapter. This is what I had envisioned for Eliza and Henry after watching the final scene of the movie.

Only 14?! But this is magnificent for a fourteen year old! I'm 17, and I played Eliza in an adaption of MFL in June. Haha otherwise I can't believe you're fourteen and have watched My Fair Lady! Most people in the cast hadn't, and they were much older than you! I absolutely love your writing, it's flow, it's prose - it's everything I could have asked for in that infuriating ending of the show. Write on x Love Elizabeth

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Hi there! I know this story was completed about 5 years ago, however, if you will allow me, I would like to give you some feedback!

Overall a heartbreaking and tragic but gorgeous story. I enjoyed it immensely! Although there's one thing that bothered me. I felt like there wasn't much closure? Maybe it was the slightly abrupt ending that made me feel this? Does she just die with Henry believing she was still having some sort of affair? I just feel that there were some loose ends! This would be my only critisicm!

Heartrending. Entirely different than I was expecting and, although it was rushed in parts and forced in others, entirely beautiful. There was much greater creativity here than I had planned for and I was continuously surprised by twists that were actually appropriate to the story. The ending leaves me conflicted. It takes determination to kill a character. I wish I could read more about how anything could possibly go on after that, about what could possibly happen to Henry and William. I would be angrier if it didn't accueratey reflect the medical care of the time. (But still, he should have called a goddamn doctor and she should have spoken her mind instead of just hoping he would understand what she wanted to hear - "why can't women be more like men".)

Wow oh my gosh i stayed up until five fifteen in the morning to read the ending and then she dies wow is all i can say. I must say you did well on the writing and even though she did die in the end i was drawn in from the very first sentence to the very ending. Very sad,but it was worth staying up and reading.

please update

I'm in shock. She DIED? WHY? They were doing so well! Although I should have seen this coming when you killed off one of their children. I don't think that was necessary. Neither was killing Eliza. WHY! I'm so sad. The first few chapters were so wonderful and lovely and then you brought me down. :(

However, despite this, the story was very well written. Characterizations were perfect and the plotline was very clean. So well done in that respect. But still. I'm sad.

Lol I know this was written awhile back but, lol this is epic just had to say the pickering being gay thing is also there was me thinking it was just me :P lol it's nice to see someone writting that in because back in the day people where kind of prudish about that. Awesome turn really love it :D ohhh and brilliant fic so far you should be really proud your an excellent writer and the story just flows so well and always stays interesting well done hun x

This is how My Fair Lady should have ended. ;D I love the writing style and the flow. A very sweet addition to a very lovely story.

I can't wait to read more.

Lyn Harkeran

Nope, I don't.

So Eliza got her own stalker now. Wonder how she'll get rid of him.

Regards,

starclipper01

I'm a guy and enjoy your story. No, I'm not gay (not that there is anything wrong with that) LoL!

So far this has been a great story and Eliza and Henry are believable characters. It's just like the film continued on after the original ending.

Love the film and loving the story so far.

Regards,

starclipper01

OMG just found this story. What a epic gem of wonder. So much has happened. I love the film and the roman e between Eliza and Henry. You portrayed all the characters beautifully and developed them further perhaps even improved them or at least softened a touching sad ending. Heartbreaking. Thanks for writing.

I love freddy. the henry freddy rivalry thing is hilarious, its funny when henry squirms when freddy's around.

Haha, I really like this story.

It's so cute how she can "read his mind." ;)