Beautiful! :)

This is the embodiment of beauty in writing as I see it. I come back to be inspired, and inspired I am. You really have a talent for prose.

So sad! But you captured Edmund perfectly.

Beautifully written, too bad that was the way he died. But the closest to kingly he can get!

OMG! :'( :'( :'( Great short story

And indeed, not only by protecting Lucy, a Narnian Lady, a Narnian Queen, his sister, did it all end, but by an afterlife better than any kingly death.

Ah, love this! 'Very Edmund', as you put it... one of my favorites! God bless you, awesome job!

Ahhh... I love that! His love for his sister and desire to protect Queen Lucy the Valient was as simple as it was beautiful. Thank you :)

Oh, indeed! A Narnian lady... the queen, Lucy, at that. And his beloved sister, too! Truly, this death might not have been that noble or heroic. but it was full of meaning nonetheless; for it lead them, no matter in what way, into Aslan's Country.

Such a wonderful piece! Love it!

Amen to that.

May He bless you each and every day.

Ah, a nice, short, beautifully written Edmund one shot. My kind of fic.

Oh, trivial, is it? Well dear Ed, you have no idea. This train accident is, in all ways, just the exact opposite of that. Wonderful, wonderful! Love the Just King, love this piece!

Wow, great fic! Short, but totally sweet. Just the way these things are done. Love it. Love Edmund! Oh, little does he know . . . He need not fret over fate. For it may not be kind, but Aslan is. And little does he know how close he is into His country at that very moment. Awesome piece!

A noble end for a noble king.

Not exactly the most comforting thing to read late at night, but amazing! I so loved it, and thought it was awesome.

Great job capturing his thoughts. I think he died the noblest death one could in that situation. ;)

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So sad, but I couldn't agree more, the ending of our noble hero wasn't the way he should have died. Always makes me sad that CS Lewis chose to end it that way.

I LOVE it!