aw loved it!

I loved this story! It was so awesome! I can't wait to go read more of your stories.

Wow. This is great! I have been having a field day reading different people's takes on HBK and Chris's recent story line. LMAO

But about your fic, great job! I like how you made Shawn the uh...top. I have the roles reversed in mine but no matter. I thought it was sweet you know? And I like how Hunter's not some lunatic in this fic.

I loved it! Cute pairing. Well written :)

*isdead* Love it! So hot and sweet. Im so glad someone wrote something after there run in at Raw the other week. Awesome story.

loved both chapters, you did a great work on these :)

Aw...this was so cute and so sweet :) I was really looking forward to this chapter and seeing the direction that the "date" between Chris and Shawn was going to go in. I know that you were worried that the first chapter was long and boring...but it wasn't! It was great, so stop worrying! Actually, it built up to this chapter and the beautiful interaction between Shawn and Chris.

Shawn should know by now that those puppy dog eyes of Jericho's are his lethal weapon and that no one can resist them :) Which is exactly what happened. Chris was so cute, wanting Shawn to stay with him. It gave me another "Aw..." moment because you just did such a good job with these two!

For some reason, I just see Shawn being the more dominant one of the two, at least in this situation. Chris could very well be dominant, and he often is in most of the stories I've read, but with Shawn, I dunno...I just see Chris being submissive. You did such a great job describing the love-making and made it so sweet and natural-I really enjoyed that part. I hope to be able to write that one day.

Chris was so cute-he was so worried that what they did meant nothing to Shawn, that it was just sex to him. But thankfully, Shawn reassured him and told him that he loved him and wanted them to be together. I thought it was so cute to have Chris brushing Shawn's hair-it added a touch of cuteness :)

Well, I have to say that this is one of the best fics you have ever written, and I'm not just saying that because I love Chris :) You did an amazing job of describing the feelings and emotions with these two, and I loved this. It was very beautifully written.

Love ya girl :)

Tina

Hey Kit Kat!

I just got up and noticed that you had posted this, which made me so happy! I was really excited about reading this from the moment you told me you were going to write it. I'm glad that I was able to help you with it a little bit, and if you ever need any help with any of your other stories in the future, please let me know!

Anyway...I am in love with this story. Your style of writing is so smooth and descriptive that I can actually see and hear the story as I am reading it. You described Jericho's feelings for Shawn with such great descriptive words and made the emotions seem real and they almost came to life, actually. I could feel the nervousness and anticipation that Chris felt when he was around Shawn. He had had feelings for Shawn for so long but had been afraid to act on them-you could really sympathize with him. Not to mention that you made Chris sound so cute :)

Yay for the shower scene! I like hot showers too, they always seem to make me feel better and calms my muscles when they are tense. Ew...nasty man boobies JBL. In the shower, too-gross. I have to agree with Chris, if I had seen that, I would have thrown up in my mouth a little too. Haha...I loved the "pretty boy" comment you threw in there too, because that's something I can see JBL saying to Chris. And Chris, being cute and clueless sometimes, would be like "Am I a pretty boy?" Funny stuff.

I LOVE those boxers...only Chris would wear something like that. Indeed, he is a sexy beast, and Shawn was right, the underwear don't lie :) Aw...seeing Chris acting so nervous and scared around Shawn was so cute! I figured he would be too nervous or scared to ask Shawn out to dinner, so Shawn needed to make the first move. And as much as I see them going to Olive Garden, I think it actually fits for them to go to McDonald's more. It's kind of low-key and laid-back, and that way neither one of them has to feel like they need to impress the other.

"I like burger guys".-Again, I can see Chris saying that. I have to tell you, you write Chris very well, maybe even better than me :) I could actually hear him while I was reading this, and you did such a good job describing everything, from the atmosphere of the bar to even the character's emotions and other features. I really, really enjoyed this and I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Thanks to Chris, I will now always wonder what is in the Big Mac's special sauce, LOL :) THat boy is just too funny for words. "Hopefully it's not nasty things, like sperm." Yup, that's Y2J for ya.

OK, I'll shut up now. I loved this chapter and I know that the next one will be EVEN better :)

Keep it up, girl, because this was AMAZING!

Tina

Wow! This is so great. It's so sweet and just makes you go... aw... and then o... and then back to aw...

I'm actually in the process of writing a fic similiar to this, but I was going to take a different path.

I'm not a huge Shawn fan when it comes to slash pairings but... you wrote this in a way that made me like him. I love the way you made Chris the submissive one - so often you find fics with him being dominant (not that I would mind him being dominant *blushes*). Well written again.

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xoxo

Good start. Hope you update again soon :)

*sighs happily* I love Shawn when he tops... *turns red* I mean, other wrestlers!

*cough* Anyway, nice, nice story. Y2J and Shawn are such a hot pair. *smiles*

~TVL~

this has to be one of my favorite pairings right now. And i loved this fic amazing job (more shawn/chris fics please)