This isn't that bad. The paragraphs seem a little to long, but I'd keep reading this. Keep on writing this please. :)

~Alexa

this is an interesting take on the after regular ben10 and the alien force series.

and then a week turns to a half a year

Rip-off of Hero High.

This is pretty interesting. I vote for Evil Kevin, it'd be way more interesting and they could get a new team member. My vote's for a kid version of Deadpool.

As for romance, I'd create more than one girl for him to be interested in. Makes things more exciting. If you want to talk about ideas for OC's, PM me. I'll be glad to help.

Expect a review for every chapter from now on if I like it.

Okay, hopefully this format works better. Enjoy people!

why is this chapter written like this; its hard to read

Great story Update soon man I cant not wait till the next one!

Have you seen Ben 10 alien force? Kevin is good now I cant believe it!

Side note by Author: Prof. Cranos is an alien like Brainstorm. so, pictue that.

Yes, in response to 's review, I did sorta, kinda model this after his AWSOME Ben 10 trilogy. Do not worry. It will be different in content, and I would likw to thank him for his pownsome stories.

strange why does this story sound so very familiar?

Impresive story Hope you continue soon.

But might I recomment paragraph-spacing more? It's a bit hard to read.