dude! my wife was cruising this site and told me about it ... after our own fun! so we'll done

May's last name is Birch, not Maple, her father's name is Birch. Professor Birch.

Omg, my mind is so dirty! I loved it! So cute!

So sweet!

Aw, I love it!

So cute!

awesome! its too good to be a lemon. i wanna have a day like this too with misty! fuckingly amazing!

I'll admit it, this made me WET.
I love how they weren't just horny teenagers and how careful and loving they were.
Such a great lemon. I wish we had more pokeshipping lemons this good.

Wow. Just. Wow

I've read my fair share of lemons, but this gotta be THE MOST DESCRIPTIVE ONE. BTW, are you the same author who wrote "Baby Steps", just curious cause' this and that are poles apart,both in theme and maturity.
It was a good read altogether :-)

When ash asked if it was Brock I cringed at the thought of misty and Brock due to the fact that I'm thinking that misty is like 18 or 19 and I'm thinking that Brock is like 28 or something like that . The thought make me want to puke a bit. ( no offense to those of you how want them together it's just that I think of a like 10 year gap) but this overall was a good story a little cliche but still good

Damn, I'm not gonna lie...this chapter made me rock-hard. And more importantly...Ash and Misty's chemistry seemed genuine...it really felt like the right balance of love and lust...if that makes sense.

I loved all of the pokeshipping stories, as I didn't bother to read the pearlshipping story. It's not that I have anything against it, it's just I'm not interested particularly in anything besides pokeshipping.

this was so adorable!

Misty's hair is orange not red stupid