No mistake. This is just what it must have been for Regulus. Great writing! Thanks for writing and sharing!

That was absolutely incredible!

well wow here are all my regulus feels bludgeoning me

thank you for this terribly good heart rending pain uuugh

This is beautifully written.

Wow. So well written. I love all the italics and parenthetical notes. Perfect - thanks for sharing.

This is absolutely chilling. I'm lost for words. You captured Regulus perfectly.

I think the only thing I can say is wow.

Your writing is amazing. Perfection. You bring Regulus to life, thank you for the wonderful story - and all the others, too.

Could you maybe write something not perfect for once? You're crushing my self-confidence.

Anyway, this was truly beautiful, I love it how you show the insanity creeping into his head.

very very good.

Sara, I think you'd like to know I put both my translations to your stories here, on my profile. :)

Still love them. And you're getting so many positive reviews here, in Poland. :)

My god,this is brilliant!i really can imagine that this is what really happens to regulus.i like how u really describe him as a very unstable,confused,under pressured,unloved, teenager,trying very hard to find who he really only sirius can see that..how regulus really needs done!

My god,this is brilliant!i really can imagine that this is what really happens to regulus.i like how u really describe him as a very unstable,confused,under pressured,unloved, teenager,trying very hard to find who he really only sirius can see that..how regulus really needs done!

I adore your characterization of Regulus.

This is amazing. You absolutely nailed Regulus. I love it love it love it.

Oh my god. That was so beautiful and sad :(