That last line reminds me of C3PO!

It was a bit hurried (ok, very hurried), but I think I like it. I dunno. The story got a bit weird near the end. I'm glad Susan started believing in Narnia again.

I'm not sure how I feel with C. S. Lewis actually being in the story, but the idea is growing on me. I LOVE his conversation with Susan, especially when he says that there are people who say, "Your will be done," and people to whom God says, "Fine, have it your way." That's really the truth of the matter. God can't work in people's lives if they don't let him.

I remembered while reading this that the big house they stayed at was destroyed. In a fire, I think. I also found a lot of grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. But that aside, this is a really great story. Normally fanfics about Su after her sibling's death are too depressing but this one is perfect. She's hurting, but moving on, the story isn't too depressing, and you have a lot of things happening to make it interesting. Keep up the good work!

very beautiful

I enjoyed it immensely

Well I kind of read the whole story together instead of reviewing in the middle I have proceeded to review at the end so here it is: it was great and putting Susan's feelings throughout was really good and although maybe (but don't hold this against anything ) the ending was a bit rushed? I don't know but it was a great ending to be honest and I'm really satisfied with the ending and I leave it happily :)

You copied the lyrics to Evanescence's "Understanding."

This is the one of, if not the best susanfic i've ever read...

I love how the story wove into the ending which is superb btw..

Suffice to say, you may have captured the journey of redemption that many people are going through right now... Kudos to you my friend!

Hey,

I loved this story i was crying for most of it. For the first part, tears of saddness for Susan, and at the end, tears of joy for everyone. And trust me, only really good books/stories make me cry. I think that less than 20 have made me cry in my life. And I have read many many books. Maybe 3-5 good sized books per month. So that should give you an accurate description. :D Keep writing.

Gwynn W.

P.S.- My username is pinknbluesharpie in case you would like to reply back.

OMG CS Lewis...kinda unexpected..

the second book...I really, really, appriciate you for writting this fanfic.

OMG... i cried while reading the letter..so beautiful...

Aslan. Is that the word she can't read? with enogh reason though. Not beliving in Narnia.

OMG she is so in pain...

OMG I always wanted to know what happened to Susan after LB, but even though i tried to make it up it never worked, i wanted for someone to tell me what happen( i know it sounds weird) So now its time to find out...